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c4c054 19-10-2003 13:05

hup zomaar uit het niets, in 1x...
 
Dit is een ''Iets'' wat is gewoon nu ff ga tikken... niet van te voren helemaal zitten denken ofs0w..maar gewoon waar ik nu met mu gedachte zit zeg maar....




At night i can't sleep
There's a secret in my mind i can't keep
My head keeps spinning....
And the only thing i do is thinking.
I just hope you could give me a clue...
Do you or don't you want me to?

Maybe it's beter to stay friends
But it's ovious how that ends...
I just want to give you a kiss..
That's what friends are goin to miss.
But an relationship is to hard.
i even don't know how to start.

But i just want you to let me know
is this love ? are you for sho?
I can't stop thinking of you
And honestly... i don't know what to do.
My mind is somewhere else, a place i don't belong
i think you are to, tell me i'm not wrong.

c4c054 19-10-2003 13:11

:o

The Meaning Of The Things You Saying,
Sounds Like My Soul is praying...
All The Things You Say To Me,
Like My Heart Supposed To Be Hungry

But My heart Is Empty Inside,
I Don't Know What To Say,...Your Just Not My Kind.
I didn't want to hurt you
But it's allready done...
I dissapointed You....
The Love Is Gone....

:evil:

Jamezy 19-10-2003 18:43

Dat (al dan niet) gesmijt met hoofdletters :nono:

Cait 19-10-2003 18:48

Citaat:

c4c054 schreef op 19-10-2003 @ 14:11:
:o

The Meaning Of The Things You Saying,
Sounds Like My Soul is praying...
All The Things You Say To Me,
Like My Heart Supposed To Be Hungry

But My heart Is Empty Inside,
I Don't Know What To Say,...Your Just Not My Kind.
I didn't want to hurt you
But it's allready done...
I dissapointed You....
The Love Is Gone....

:evil:

Is die van jou? Hij lijkt een beetje (sorry als het niet zo is!!!) op de cu2-pagina dichtwerk. Het is echt niet mijn smaak, beetje gemaakt misschien.
Die, bovenste (eerste) daarentegen... spreekt me al meer aan. Kan me er aardig in vinden, hoewel ik me een beetje erger aan de grammatica (maar daar neuk ik mieren, ik geef het toe ). Daarnaast is je rijm me iets te schattig, maar dat verschilt heel erg per persoon geloof ik :)


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