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sublime

23-10-2003 15:18

The Guide

silence and emptiness
are one

no one knows
what's the truth
of this world

tolerance
individuality

I'm the guide
the one road
will I be your truth

believe
have faith

zero is one

no one will understand
the secrets of life

I'm the guide

Polyhymnia86

23-10-2003 15:29

Nice to see some other persons writing in English as well :)

I really like this style of writing, the short lines/words... makes you think of every single word you read... Adds more depth to the poem, creates a beautiful atmosphere with simple words...

(y)

sublime

25-10-2003 15:55

thanx very muxh :) *buigt*

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