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Zo'n fucking goede gedichten
From: Del aka Abe Jones, submitted: 08/21/2002 8:47:49 AM
E-mail: (commenter email and IP address are in file) "LET'S ROLL" (Beamer me up, Toddy) They were on a flight Going from here to there Just another day Each one, without a care. Some were on a cell phone With loved ones or business What they all talked about We can only guess. Then they got the news About WTC And then they realized The next one is "we". Some of them were moved forward The rest moved to the rear And it's hard to imagine The helplessness and fear. But, they must have got to talking And figured out their plight That in the list of "bombers" They were, the next "flight". Wonder what went through their minds And how much, they were "scared" But, when they thought, " The USA" Realized, how much they cared. We think about our "heroes" And those on the "front line" Then, we all heard, "Let's roll" They knew, that it was time. To step up and sacrifice Whatever, it may take And made the call, most of us Won't ever have to make. They stood up for America Knew what they had to do And let's not ever forget They did it, for me and you. Nobody will ever know What went on on that plane We just know, it added to The misery and pain. We all had, had enough On that September day But, they just gave us more To pray for, the same way. Another bunch, of the lost souls We lost on nine-eleven But they aren't lost for they found Their little niche in heaven. Del aka Abe Jones 8-20-02 9/11 An anniversary coming soon With no celebration A day to observe What's happened to our nation. Maybe, this time will be different That, we won't soon, forget And we'll remember day to day That, it's not over, yet. WHERE WAS I ? I was feeling kind of ill And stayed home that day Was watching the morning news As usual, that's my way. Katie, Matt, Ann and Al Were doing what they do best But, little did they know About that day of "our test". I don't remember what the "news" was Probably the same old thing There were some elections Part of what, makes "Freedom Ring". Then, the "breaking news" About a "terrible accident" Even that was bad enough But, much worse, where it went. I called a friend at work And while I talked to her The second plane struck And then I felt the "terror". The tears began to flow And my heart began to ache As I hoped, it was a bad dream Or some terrible mistake. But, as that day went on In a blurred, slow motion haze I realized our country's history Had moved to an unknown phase. The security of our borders Had been forever changed And they way we think about ourselves Drastically re-arranged. We're in the "real world" now And, that's so sad, I thought But, we'll have to make the best of it Whether we like it, or not. A year has come, to pass But, that day will linger here In my heart and mind As, I shed another tear. I hope we've learned some lessons But, I do it with some doubt Because, hate, greed and jealousy Is, what mankind seems to tout. Del aka Abe Jones 8-18-02 911 ON 9-11 You cowards of the world Don't think, you can rejoice For, hear this message loud and clear From one, united voice. The civilized among us Will make you rue this day And you'll find it won't be worth The price, you'll have to pay. Some say they are "holy wars" But that mighty supreme being Must be cringing from the sights That He has been seeing. I bet He never dreamed That He'd created such as you That the Devil could possess And make you do what you do. He didn't create life on Earth To destroy one another You might think you'll go to Heaven But, you'll end up in the "other". When people kill their fellowman In the name of their "Maker" All of them end up as The worst kind of "forsaker". Religious zealots have killed more Than, for any other reason And it has been the worst kind Of, what some may call treason. An affront to all that's right That's decent and humane Strong beliefs are okay Until, they become, INSANE! You didn't strike America You hurt every human soul And you gave us all resolve To thwart your evil goal. You are less than animals Worse than rats from the sewer A mutant of our species That this world has to endure. But, your days are numbered Hear this, above the painful wail That people of good will and heart Are the ones, who will, prevail. CATHEDRAL OF TEARS Jutting from the rubble Up through the smoky haze Like spires of a Cathedral Where the "believer" prays. Seven stories of heartache Left from the hundred-ten Of those two mighty towers Never to be seen again. For thousands who have perished And the loved ones they leave A monument to all of us Who shed our tears, and grieve. In its eerie setting There was a sort of beauty Standing guard over those Who died doing their duty. A strange sense of peace Amidst the scene of ruin As others search for comrades Who died, doing what they're doing. There's been heroes by the hundreds And some stories, never known But in God's Cathedral They'll sit upon His throne. The "Cathedral Of Tears" Will last in our mind's eye As we bow our heads And ask, "Why, dear Lord? Why?" THE WHOLE HEARTLAND I wrote about the heartland When the Murrah Building fell And I thought at that time We'd had a taste of "hell". But, to see "The Towers" Over NYC Fall into the ground Took, the heart out of me. Knowing all those souls With nowhere to run Like looking down the barrel Of a cocked, loaded gun. Watching people jump To a certain, horrid death Made me wonder what I'd say With my last, final breath. Or looking out the window To watch, that "hell" doomed plane As it crashed into me Through, that shattered window pane. The terror in my mind And my helpless reeling As my body blew away Into that deathly feeling. Knowing all those loved ones That I would never see Would bow their heads in sorrow And say, a prayer for me. But, prayers don't seem to do All that, we think they should And most the time we wonder If prayers do any good. Does "He" really care? Has "He " ever heard? Does, "He" really listen To, our "private word"? And if, "He" does hear them Why does "He" forsake "them" When we try to do it right Even, followed by "Amen". Can "He" be so cruel That, "He" will make us pay For, that "bite of the apple" That, sent us all this way. I guess, sometimes the "Devil" Might have the upper hand And give us pain and heartbreak So, we will understand. We have to take the good things That, delve into our heart As well, as the bad That, break our heart, apart. Abe 10-30-01 A DIFFERENT CALLING This year the "Memorial" has changed It's different than those past A different kind of war From a different, "stone cast". The battle is at Freedom's doorstep With heroes of a different kind Now, all of us are "Soldiers" Against, the terrorists "sick" mind. Civilians have always been A part of every war But, in this day and age We must do, so much more. If we expect to win this Battle We must all join hands In a strong, determined circle With, Freedom lovers from all lands. This world has changed forever "The American Way" There's so much more at stake Than, the way we live and play. Since 9-11 we're learning The horrors of this world Can even come to where Freedoms Flag is, unfurled. This day was meant to Honor All, Military Heroes have endured Now, we all could join their Ranks If our resolve, is not assured. So, let us all take a moment To respect all those, "Fallen" And vow, we're all up to the task Of this, different "Calling". Del "Abe" Jones May 26, 2002 VETERANS ALL Well! We're in a different world Than, what, we ever knew It will never, be the same As it was, for me and you. I think that, since 9/11 Some words forever changed Like the meaning of "Veteran" Has been, re-arranged. Now, we all are fighters For our "freedoms' cause" If we don't stand, be counted We'll have lost, "the cause, that was!" On this Veterans' Day In this "land of the free" We honor those, who gave all Those with us, and those, yet to be. We honor those who perished In attacks upon our shore And those hunting evildoers Who came through our "open door". We honor all Americans And freedom lovers of the world Where flags like, "The Stars And Stripes" Fly in the breeze, unfurled. I think from this day forth All patriotic celebrations Will always give us pause To these new, realizations. We must rid this Earth Of those "Devils" and their goals With terror on their minds Within their hateful souls. So, here's to all the Veterans Who have made "Freedom Ring" And, those around the world Who know! We have a "special" thing. Abe Sunday, November 11, 2001 JULY THE FOURTH, TWO THOUSAND TWO I wonder what those folks would think (Those, who wrote our Freedom's Declaration) Would they believe, those happenings That have, forever changed our Nation. Would they believe, some terrorists Are, from our Country, homegrown Spreading hate, death, and destruction In the Homeland of their own. Would they believe our "open door" Has ushered in our enemy Those who believe we're evil And don't believe in Liberty. What would they think, if they could see Crime running rampant, in the street Guns, drugs, and homeless people And so many more, locked-in, retreat. Would they believe, Freedoms treasured Have been twisted all around To where the criminals civil rights Beat the victims, to the ground. Would they believe, that businesses Most of them, big and small Treat their employees as the pawns To reach, "the bottom line", that's all. Would they believe, those voted to Office Who we should trust, to guide the way Can't be trusted, most of the time To live up to what, they say. What would they think, would they rewrite And would they take exceptance To what we did, with what they wrote In The Declaration Of Independence. echt joh. elke keer als ik die beelden zie of hoor. :mad: maar deze gedichten zijn echt mooi. mensen hebben die geschreven over mensen die ze zijn verloren bij 9- 11 (11-09-01 |
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Iets zegt mij dat de titel niet klopt!!!!!!! zo'n fucking goede gedichten dat kan niet. Het moet zijn zulke fucking goede gedichten |
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Als je zoveel weet te schrijven over een onderwerp vind ik het al niet echt goed meer en bovendien zijn het in mijn ogen gewoon slechte gedichten. De rijm die ik zie loopt niet lekker en het heeft allemaal dezelfde toon; wat is Amerika toch goed en wat zijn we toch zielig omdat die slechte mannen ons hebben aangevallen. Bah.
edit: ik zie net dat het door verschillende mensen geschreven is? Onder een aantal staat dezelfde naam, maar de rest komt dus van anderen? -Er zijn er dus meer die zo slecht schrijven?! :eek: |
Dit is meer wat voor DoP
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slecht, nee. pathetisch, middelmatig en eenzijdig, ja.
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Heb je bronvermelding? (internetadres ofzo) En toestemming om dit hier te plaatsen? Want anders is het, ondanks dat je de schrijvers vermeldt, toch plagiaat en dat mag hier niet.
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