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Carl 29-04-2002 19:31

~The Burden of Pain~
 
~THE BURDEN OF PAIN~

See my eyes, See
It’s all over my soul
I can’t live without,
The feeling
The sun is shining,
My heart is crying,
Sad,
As Yesterday.
Every word you spoke to me,
Takes my one step closer.
Some day,
I’ll fall down.
Can you save yourself,
When I flew away
I can’t take control
Everything is gone
I just realize I’m alone


Wat vinden jullie hier nou van??
xxx

Lethalis 30-04-2002 07:37

Hmm, moeilijk.

"Takes my one step closer"
-> Takes me one step closer

"When I flew away"
-> When I fly away?

Lijkt me, misschien dat anderen er anders over denken. Voor de rest loopt 'ie wel..

Carl 01-05-2002 08:03

dankjewel;)


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