Tragic end of humanity
 

There they came, over the hill.
Jumping like outrageous madmen.
The leader saw us and spinned around,
to attack his followers without a warning.

Never since the break of dawn,
had there been such a betrayal.
We stood silently and watched,
while the madmen killed eachother

All the women turned as one and walked away.
For it was the womens that stood and watched.
But our eyes couldn't see tragedy no more.
And our arms couldn't fight tiranny once again.

Damned let them be! we shouted.
For no more shall any man,
ever pass the door to our home.
Or cross the path to our hearts.

je engels :nono: :P

hij is wel geinig

wat is er met mijn engels?

Paar foutjes verbeterd, en verder snap ik dit gedeelte niet echt:

All the women turned as one and walked away.
For it was the womens that stood and watched.

2x women?

En daarbij vind ik het niet zo'n geweldig gedicht, het loopt niet lekker..