Songtext: All that was bad (niet zo bijzonder)
 

En niet erg orgineel vrees ik, ik kan wel wat tipz gebruiken voor ik dit laat zien:)

Tis op een soft-rock nummer, en na de eerste 2 coupletten wordt het pas een stuk drukker...


All that was bad

I shall not fear, I shall not hide,
I won't recall those tears inside.
I never meant, to be this way,
It' just how you made me stay.
It's not that I won't to live my life,
it's just empty deep inside.
And it's not, all that bad...

As long as the stars won't fall on my head,
I think it's okay, to be a little mad,
about all those times you made me believe,
that it was usual to crawl and decieve.
It's not that I ever said some,
It's just how we played, you won,
And it's all so sad...

So sad to be with you,
everytime I love to be with you,
Still I wanted to get to you,
and it's all inside my head.
You just burn inside my head.

It's so sad.

The way we walked,
the things you said,
We never talked,
I'd rather listen instead.
The dreams we had,
Al that I desire,
It wasn't all bad,
just burned in the fire.

It's so sad...

So terrible sad that I still love,
That my feelings are going my world above,
my heart that's beating in slowmotion,
still it trumbles when you call.
Ain't we all, women, ain't we all

and it's all inside my head.
You just burn inside my head.

It's so sad...

Ik vind hem erg lekker lopen... waar wil je eigenlijk tips over? Over de inhoud ofzo? Ik zal er vanavond nog wel ff naar kijken, maar zover ik vind hem best goed eigenlijk :)...

Mjah de inhoud en of het verhaal duidelijk overkomt..>Het ritme enzo zit wel goed...

Ik vin um goei!!

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Ik vinem mooi!>>ritme is inderdaad goed
qua inhoud>> sterk...vooral die herhaling er in maakt 'm sterk..
ik vind de tekst wel duidelijk..


liefs,
Mariamne