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Angelleyes 02-05-2002 21:07

oke, anders dan anders...
 
het is wat anders dan normaal.... wat vinden jullie ervan?

Poem for the unknown

There's an unknown world
in the eyes of this stranger
explored just a little more
every time you pass me by


I hunger for your inner secrets
Which will never be exposed
for I didn't fall in love with you;
I fell in love with the unknown

So now the ancient myth is real
and there's nothing that I can do
an impossible love, felt by one
can never be shared by two

iamre18 04-05-2002 09:01

Citaat:

Angelleyes schreef:
het is wat anders dan normaal.... wat vinden jullie ervan?

Poem for the unknown

There's an unknown world
in the eyes of this stranger
explored just a little more
every time you pass me by


I hunger for your inner secrets
Which will never be exposed
for I didn't fall in love with you;
I fell in love with the unknown

So now the ancient myth is real
and there's nothing that I can do
an impossible love, felt by one
can never be shared by two


Ik vind er een goed ritme inzitten, mooie vorm....
Qua inhoud>>Ik vind die 1e strophe erg mooi gevonden&verwoord!.....gedicht eindigt ook "goed"...

liefsxxx,
Mariamne

Angelleyes 06-05-2002 22:33

:) dankjeweldankjewel :)


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