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Hallo iedereen, ik(broertje van daan) heb vandaag de opdracht gekregen een brief te schrijven naar iemand over een engels school in Engeland. Als ik deze brief inlever krijg ik er een cijfer voor maar aangezien ik nog maar in de 2e zit en heel slecht ben in engels zit het helemaal vol met fouten. Zouden jullie het aub kunnen veranderen.Want ik ben zo slecht in Engels en kan gewoon geen brieven schrijven.Ik weet dat heel de tekst hopeloos is wat ik heb maar verder kom ik gewoon niet:'(
Willen jullie me aub helpen??

How are you?I’m fine
I was rather surprised when I read about the school rules from a Grammar School for Boys. I have always think that all the schools of Engeland are mixed.But that’s obviously not the case. Are all the schools so strict, or is this school a exception?Is it normal that the boys go up the roof?What are they doing there?I think that’s not normal.I find it a weird round.I can realize that armament are forbidden, but what’s a missile?Is that a species missiel??I fully agree that smoking in school is forbidden. May the teachers don’t smoke too?.Bearing all the childeren in Engeland a school uniform?The childeren in the Netherlands shout to rebel againt, when they must bearing a school uniform.Why must the boys bearing a apron?When are bear they that?What ‘s actually your opinion about school uniforms?
I hope you don’t mind my that I putting down so much questions.I’m very interesting in schools of Engeland, there are perhaps programms at the television.

I hope that you write back,

[QUOTE]xx-daantje-xx schreef op 31-08-2004 @ 19:43 :
[B]Hallo iedereen, ik(broertje van daan) heb vandaag de opdracht gekregen een brief te schrijven naar iemand over een engels school in Engeland. Als ik deze brief inlever krijg ik er een cijfer voor maar aangezien ik nog maar in de 2e zit en heel slecht ben in engels zit het helemaal vol met fouten. Zouden jullie het aub kunnen veranderen.Want ik ben zo slecht in Engels en kan gewoon geen brieven schrijven.Ik weet dat heel de tekst hopeloos is wat ik heb maar verder kom ik gewoon niet:'(
Willen jullie me aub helpen??

How are you?I’m fine
I was rather surprised when I read about the school rules from a Grammar School for Boys. I always thougt that all the schools of Engeland where mixed.But that’s obviously not the case. Are all the schools so strict, or is this school a exception?Is it normal that the boys go up the roof?What are they doing there?I think that’s not normal.I find it a weird round.I can realize that armament is forbidden, but what’s a missile?Is that a species missiel??I fully agree that smoking in school is forbidden. are the teachers also not alowed to smoke? Do all the childeren in England wear a school uniform. The childeren in the Netherlands shout to rebel againt, when they must bearing a school uniform.Why must the boys bearing a apron?When are bear they that?What ‘s your opinion about school uniforms?
I hope you don’t mind my that I putting down so much questions.I’m very interested in schools of Engeland,

there are perhaps programms at the television.
wat moest dit zijn in het nederlands??

en bearing, bedoel je daar mee wearing??

I find it a weird roud??
bedoel je daar mee gewoonte want dan moet het zijn
I think it's a weird costum.

Ik heb verder nog wat dingen verberbeterd, maaruh, zo slecht is het niet hoor :)

succes

*an exception
*also not is niet juist, ik denk dat het 'neither' moet zijn
*allowed, met twee 'l'-en
*again zonder 't'
*when they must bearing a school uniform --> when they have to wear a school uniform
*Why must the boys bearing a apron --> why do the boys have to ware an apron (wat dat ook moge wezen, an apron)
*When are bear they that? --> when do they wear it (k denk toch dat je dat bedoelt)
*I hope you don’t mind my that I putting down so much questions --> I hope you don't mind that I've put down so many questions (put down, wat wil je hiermee bedoelen eigenlijk?)

Ik heb er even snel naar gekeken en wat dingen veranderd; af en toe heb ik er ook wat langere zinnen van gemaakt of de formulering veranderd, zodat het niet meer één groot vragenvuur is. Wel heb ik geprobeerd jouw woordkeuze zoveel mogelijk aan te houden en het niveau op een normale tweede klas te houden :)

En een goeie tip; zoek iemand die goed is in Engels en ga er af en toe mee praten of chatten; als je iemand hebt die je onmiddelijk kan verbeteren gaat je Engels echt met sprongen vooruit :)


Denk aan de normale aanhef, datum, adressering!

How are you? I'm fine.

I was rather surprised when I read about the school rules from a British Grammar School for Boys. I've always thought all the schools in Britain are mixed, but this is obviously not the case. Are all schools so strict or is this school an exeption? And is it normal that the boys go up to the roof? I don't understand what they possibly could be doing there, but I don't think it's normal.

Hier ben ik je even kwijt, kun je vertellen wat het in het Nederlands moest zijn?

Also, I totally agree smoking inside the school is prohibited, but I'm still wondering; can't the teachers smoke as well or do they make an exeption for staff-members? And do all children in Britain were a school uniform? I'd really like to know, because in the Netherlands children get really upset when there's even just a rumour about introducing school uniforms to our schools.

Why do the boys have to wear an apron and when do they have to wear it? (Hier begrijp ik niet goed wat je bedoelt. Bedoel je daadwerkelijk een schort? ) And what's your opinion about the topic?

I hope you don't mind me asking so many questions, but I'm very interested in schools in Britain and perhaps there are programmes on tv. (Wat bedoel je hier?)

En dan krijg je hier dus een normale afsluiting en ondertekening

do all children in Britain were a school uniform --> wear, niet 'were'

* I thought all the schools in England were mixed
* I don't consider that normal / I don't think that's normal
* allowed
* children, niet childeren
* that I've put down
* on the telly, niet at the television

sommige zinnen snap ik niet

'on tv' is ook goed

Daar had ik gewoon overheen gelezen :o Talk about stupid.... :o

How are you? I'm fine.

I was rather surprised when I read about the school rules of a British Grammar School for Boys. I thought all the schools in Britain were mixed, but this is obviously not the case. Are all schools that strict or is this school an exception?

And is it normal that the boys go up to the roof? I don't
understand what they possibly could be doing there, but I don't think it's normal. ???

Also, I fully agree that smoking inside school should be prohibited, but I'm still wondering; are the teachers still allowed to smoke or do they make an exception for staff-members? And do all children in Britain have to wear a school uniform? I'd really like to know, because Dutch children really get upset when there's only just a rumour that school uniforms will be introduced at our schools.

Why do the boys have to wear an apron and when do they have to wear it? And what's your opinion on this matter?

I hope you don't mind me asking so many questions, but I'm very interested in schools in Britain and do you know if there are TV-programmes that I could watch?