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jewel4life 03-10-2004 23:47

Whispers
 
Her thick dark hair like a mask upon her face
Makes it look like everything is right
Her gentle voice softly whispers in your ear:
“Please stay with me tonight”
That sexy girl leaves a trace inside your head
As you stare into her eyes
She asks you again, even softer than before
Guaranteed to mesmerize
She softly ties you down on the bed
You’re excited, what’s that about?
As her hands travel your body like that
You’re begging for her to get out
She looks at you as if she’s mad
Her hands softly travel towards your neck
And once again she whispers to you:
“It’s too late, you can’t go back”

white witch 03-10-2004 23:52

Ik vind m cool. Het ritme loopt lekker en het woordgebruik is redelijk origineel. (niet dat afgezaagde taalgebruik)

Maar then again, ik hou van Engels :)


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