engels

Hey
Wil iemand dit kleine stukje nakijken (is een deel van m’n stelopdracht voor school)
Verhaaltje slaat verder nergens op.
Alvast super bedankt.

At once a time, long a ago, their was a boy called Tim. He was five years old.
He lived in a little house, somewhere in Holland. Today, was the big day!
Because it was the first real day on primary school. That was very exciting for Tim.
Together with his mum, he went to a very big warehouse in the middle of the city.
He’d bought ten note books. He was going to learn read and write on school.
He likes that. Because as he could do that, everything will be a much easier for him.
He will be understand everything better.

[Vogelvrij]

Je moet nooit afgekorte vormen gebruiken, dus He had in plaats van He'd.

Verder is het geloof ik: He was going to learn reading and writing on school.

[M@rco]

Once upon a time there was a boy called Tim. He was five years old. He lived in a small house, somewhere in Holland. Today was the big day: it was the first real day on primary school, which was very exciting for Tim. Together with his mum, he went to a very big warehouse in the middle of the city. He bought ten note books. He was going to learn how to read and write in school. He liked that because if he could do that, everything would be a much easier for him. He would understand everything better.

dankje