Engels mondeling.. (spreekbeurt controleren)

[sammiej]

Hai Allemaal..!!

Ik heb a.s. dinsdag engels mondeling. Ik ga dan een stukje vertellen over mijn vervolgopleiding. Ik heb het af, maar weet niet of ik alles wel goed heb gedaan, de goede woordkeuze enz...

Zou iemand dit even voor mij willen controleren??
Alvast bedankt..

Mijn tekst:
I’m going to talk about my continuation course.
I’m going to study commercial economics.
The study will learn you something about economics and methods to sell products.
You can expect subjects like commercial economics, business economics, Dutch, English and maths. And you also have to choose a third language: German or French. I’m going to choose French.

The duration of my continuation course is 4 years.
- In the first year you can get your foundation course, with you foundation course you can go to an university. In the first year you will get general subjects, like commercial economics and business economics. Also you have to improve your languages.
- In the second year you are going to go deeply into the subjects of the first year.
- In the third and fourth year, you will do a work placement practice. Also you are going to specialise in a subject.

This study does have admission requirements. With the profiles C&M (Culture&Society) and E&M (Economics&Society) you are allowed automatically. With the profiles N&G and N&T you have to have Economics 1 in your chosen set of course options to be allowed to this study.

In the future you can become a manager or a commercial adviser with this continuation course. You will get a function in sale or marketing of companies.

I’m going to study commercial economics on the Avans college in Den Bosch. This college stands well confessed. A high percentage of people who have the study successful wound up. A percentage of 59 percent. This is the highest percentage of Holland.
This college is also very new. It is build in 1990. it’s a very modern building with much glass.

I have chosen this study because I like economics and I didn’t had a real profession in my thoughts. With this study I can become very different professions. I also like that the study is in Den Bosch, which is very close to my town.

[sammiej]

Niemand..?

I’m going to talk about my continuation course. (ehm, rotzin wel.. "I'm going to talk about what I'm going to study next year"?)
I’m going to study commercial economics.
The study will teach you something about economics and about ways to sell products.
You can expect subjects like commercial economics, business economics, Dutch, English and maths. And you also have to choose a third language: German or French. I’m going to choose French.

The duration of this study is 4 years. / This study takes 4 years.
- In the first year you can get your foundation course [je wat? ], with you foundation course you can go to a university. In the first year you will get general subjects, like commercial economics and business economics. Also you have to improve your languages.
- In the second year you are going to study the subjects of your first year more thoroughly.
- In the third and fourth year, you will do a work placement practice (stage? > internship). Also you are going to specialise in one subject.

This study does have admission requirements. With the profiles C&M (Culture&Society) and E&M (Economics&Society) you are accepted automatically. With the profiles N&G and N&T you have to have Economics 1 in your chosen set of course options to be accepted.

In the future you can become a manager or a commercial adviser with this study. You will get a function in sale or marketing of companies.

I’m going to study commercial economics on the Avans college in Den Bosch. This college is highly valued. A high percentage of people who studied commercial economics there, ended up with good results. 59% finished the study succesfully: this is the highest percentage of all the schools in the Netherlands that offer this course. This college is also very new. It is build in 1990. It’s a very modern building with a lot of glass.

I have chosen this study because I like economics and I didn’t had a real profession in mind. With this study I can be a lot of things, a lot of carriers are possible. I also like the fact that the college is situated in Den Bosch, which is very close to my home town.


Weet niet alles helemaal zeker, maar oke.

[NilsHolgersson]

En dat ga je zo opdreunen? Zal een spannende spreekbeurt worden.. je kunt beter wat kernwoorden op papier zetten of niks ipv zo'n uitgetypte tekst

als ik alleen je laatste alinea bekijk:

I have chosen this study because I like economics and I didn’t had a real profession in my thoughts. With this study I can become very different professions. I also like that the study is in Den Bosch, which is very close to my town.

I didn't HAVE a
en de tweede zin is ook vaag, je kunt niet 'become a profession' zeggen, je wordt geen baan

[sammiej]

Bedankt!!

(Ga het niet opdreunen...moet uit t hoofd..)