Engels controleren

[sidney_cooker]

Hallo allemaal!!!!
Ik zit bij piet-r in de klas en ik moet hetzelfde als hem doen, een sollicitatiegesprek maken!!!! hij gaf mij de tip om lid te worden van dit forum.
hieronder staat een gesprekkie, zouden jullie deze kunnen controleren!?
Ik ben geen ster in Engels dus ik heb jullie hulp hard nodig!

FAST FOOD RESTAURANT (Made By Sidney)

Manager of the restaurant: so you are looking for an summer job at my restaurant?

Applicant: yes that is true I think that I’m pretty good at the job

Manager of the restaurant: do you have any work experience at the back of the checkout or cooking?

Applicant: yes I can do both I have stand at the back of the checkout before and I’ve followed a cooking class

Manager of the restaurant: is that true that is pretty nice so what sort of recipes can you make?

Applicant: I’ve specialized myself in the Asian kitchen I can make things like spring rolls or sushi

Manager of the restaurant: so looking at your cv your only 16 years old and still at school so if I may ask what are your plans for the future?

Applicant: I’m studying biology and want to become an doctor

Manager of the restaurant: that are big plans young man so about your job what work times do you prefer?



Applicant: I like to work in the morning or midday because in the evening I want to hang out with my friends and enjoy my summer vacation

Manager of the restaurant: I can understand that is it okay if I put your work time from 9am till 3pm

Applicant: I have no problem with that oh and do I have to work in the weekends I just want to know that

Manager of the restaurant: no that isn’t needed I have a few other students that also have a part time job and they are already working in the weekends so your free to go and stand where you want

Applicant: thanks I also want to know what my payment will be because that is the whole thing where I’m working for

Manager of the restaurant: your salary will be about £5 an hour 6 hours each day 5 days a week is about £200 each week that is of course a lot of money that you will earn

Applicant: wow that is almost more then my dad earns in one month he will be proud on my can I ask one last question

Manager of the restaurant: yes of course you can

Applicant: when can I start working here?

Manager of the restaurant: well because of the many part time job at my restaurant and the time of working you chose I think in about three weeks

Applicant: three weeks! But that is the last day of my summer vacation

Manager of the restaurant: I’m sorry but that is how life goes

Ik weet dat er wat foutjes in zitten... alvast bedankt!

[sidney_cooker]

Hieronder staan nog 2 gesprekjes, ik moet er naamlijk 3, alvast bedankt!

MARKET STALL (Made By Sidney & Jaap)

Applicant: Hello, I’m here for the job.

Employer: Ok. Come and walk around with me than we can talk.
May I ask your name?

Applicant: Yes, that’s Jan.

Employer: Ok. Can you tell something about yourself.

Applicant: Yes, of course. I’m sixteen years old and I work before in some other market stalls. Well, my hobbies are playing football and go hang out with my
friends.

Employer: Well, that sounds interesting. Where did you worked before?

Applicant: I worked before by a market stall in Birmingham, but it was a bit far away.

Employer: Ok. What do you study at this moment.

Applicant: I’m studying to become a salesman. I think I need to study for six more years in the Erfgooiers College and in the university of Utrecht. I’m now in the fifth
grade.

Employer: How long do you want to work here?

Applicant: Well, my summer vacation last until 20 august. So I can work here for about 7 weeks. Than I will go back to Holland.

Employer: Good you can begin here tomorrow morning at
7a.m.



Applicant: Great, thanks.

Employer: Do you have any further questions?

Applicant: Yes. I want to know what I will earn?

Employer: I need a moment to think about that. It will be
around five pounds an hour.

Applicant: Until how late do I have to work?

Employer: You need to work nine hours with me.
So that will be until 4 o’clock afternoon.

Applicant: Do I also have to work in the weekends?

Employer: No, than will you be free and go hangout with
your friends, because I already have someone else those days.

Applicant: Thanks, than I see you tomorrow at seven a.m.

Employer: Bye.

Applicant: Goodbye.











Campsite (Made by Jaap)

Employer: Hello Mark welcome. I’m Marcel. Take a seat.

Applicant: Hello Marcel

Employer: Can you tell me something about you?

Applicant: Yes of course, I’m Mark and I’m 17 years old.
I sit in the fifth class on the Erfgooiers College in Holland. I love football. Later, I want to be a footballer in England.

Employer: Ok. Well, you have written a application, but we have a few questions. Why have you solicitate at a
camping?

Applicant: That’s that I love people that go on vacation.
They’re always friendly and sociable.

Employer: Ok. Have you any work experience?

Applicant: Yes, I’ve worked on the market by a fruiterer,
when I was twelve years old, but I moved away to another city. That’s the reason that I stopped with the job.

Employer: Ok, that sounds very good.
And did you get on with people? Because, you have to work always with people, children but also adults.
For example by the swimming pool and by the activities for the children.

Applicant: Yes, of course. I never had any big problems with people.

Employer: What time do you want to start?

Applicant: I think about 2 weeks, because I have school and a lot of exams to do.
Employer: And what kind of position in the camping do you want?

Applicant: What are the positions?

Employer: The positions are: bath superintendent, organise activities or working by in the kitchen in a restaurant.

Applicant: I’m doubting between the bath superintendent or working in the restaurant.

Employer: Ok. You must know it above 2 weeks.

Employer: Right ok. You must be by the reception in the morning at 10 hour. Have you some questions about the job.

Applicant: Yes. What would be achievable to be my salary?

Employer: I think four pounds an hour

Applicant: Great, thanks

Employer: Ok. We are seeing each other over 2 weeks.

Applicant: Goodbye Mr. Marcel

Employer: Bye

Dada

[Lorelei]

Als je in het eerste gesprekje nou eens begint met interpunctie.

[mathfreak]

*ik geef hieronder de verschillende gesprekken met de nodige correcties weer*
FAST FOOD RESTAURANT

Manager of the restaurant: So you are looking for a summer job at my restaurant?
*je gebruikt alleen an als het woord dat er op volgt met een medeklinkerklank begint*

Applicant: Yes, that is right. I think that I’m pretty good at the job

Manager of the restaurant: Do you have any work experience with working behind the checkout or with cooking?

Applicant: Yes, I can do both. I have worked behind the checkout before and I’ve followed a cooking class.

Manager of the restaurant: Is that true? That is pretty nice. So what sort of recipes can you make?

Applicant: I’ve specialized myself in the Asian kitchen. I can make things like spring rolls or sushi.

Manager of the restaurant: Looking at your CV I see you are only 16 years old and still at school, so may I ask what your plans are for the future?
*your is een persoonlijk voornaamwoord en moet dus niet worden verward met de samentrekking you're*
Applicant: I’m studying biology and want to become a doctor

Manager of the restaurant: Those are big plans, young man. So, about your job, what work times do you prefer?

Applicant: I like to work in the morning or afternoon because in the evening I want to hang out with my friends and enjoy my summer holiday.

Manager of the restaurant: I can understand that. Is it okay if I put your work time from 9 a.m. till 3 p.m.?

Applicant: I have no problem with that. Oh, and do I have to work at the weekends? I just want to know that.

Manager of the restaurant: No, you needn't/that isn’t necessary. I have a few other students that also have a part time job and they are already working at the weekends, so you are free to go and stand where you want then.

Applicant: Thanks. I also want to know what my payment will be because that is the whole thing which I’m working for
*where kan als betrekkelijk voornaamwoord alleen bij plaatsaanduidingen worden gebruikt*
Manager of the restaurant: Your salary will be about £5 an hour. 6 hours each day, 5 days a week is about £200 each week. That is of course a lot of money that you will earn.

Applicant: Wow, that is almost more than my dad earns in a month.
*then kan alleen als bijwoord van tijd worden gebruikt*
He will be proud of me. Can I ask one last question?

Manager of the restaurant: Yes, of course you can.

Applicant: When can I start working here?

Manager of the restaurant: Well, because of the many part time jobs at my restaurant and the time of working you chose I think in about three weeks

Applicant: Three weeks! But that are the last days of my summer holiday.

Manager of the restaurant: I’m sorry but that is how life goes.

MARKET STALL

Applicant: Hello, I’m here for the job.

Employer: Ok. Come and walk around with me. Then we can talk.
May I ask your name?

Applicant: Yes, that’s Jan.

Employer: Ok. Can you tell something about yourself?

Applicant: Yes, of course. I’m sixteen years old and I worked before in some other market stalls.
*before verwijst naar het verleden, dus moet je de verleden tijd worked gebruiken*
Well, my hobbies are playing football and hanging out with my
friends.

Employer: Well, that sounds interesting. Where did you work before?
*alleen het hulpwerkwoord to do staat in de verleden tijd*
Applicant: I worked at a market stall in Birmingham before, but it was a bit far away.

Employer: Ok. What do you study at this moment?

Applicant: I’m studying to become a salesman. I think I need to study for six more years at the Erfgooiers College and at the university of Utrecht. I’m now in the fifth form.

Employer: How long do you want to work here?

Applicant: Well, my summer holiday lasts until 20th August.
*namen van dagen en maanden worden altijd met een hoofdletter geschreven*
So I can work here for about 7 weeks. Then I will go back to Holland/the Netherlands.

Employer: Good. you can begin here at 7 a.m. tomorrow morning.



Applicant: Great, thanks.

Employer: Do you have any further questions?

Applicant: Yes. I want to know what I will earn.

Employer: I need a moment to think about that. It will be
about five pounds an hour.

Applicant: Until how late do I have to work?

Employer: You need to work nine hours with me.
So that will be until 4 o’clock in the afternoon.

Applicant: Do I also have to work at the weekends?

Employer: No, then you will be free and can hang out with
your friends, because I already have someone else those days.

Applicant: Thanks, I will see you tomorrow at seven a.m. then.

Employer: Untill tomorrow then. Goodbye.

Applicant: Goodbye.

Campsite

Employer: Hello Mark, welcome. I’m Marcel. Take a seat.

Applicant: Hello Marcel

Employer: Can you tell me something about you?

Applicant: Yes of course, I’m Mark and I’m 17 years old.
I am in the fifth form of the Erfgooiers College in Holland. I love football. Later, I want to be a footballer in England.

Employer: Ok. Well, you have written an application, but we still have a few questions. Why did you apply at a
camping?
*er bestaat wel een werkwoord to solicit, maar dat betekent een verzoek indienen of tippelen*
Applicant: That’s because I like people that go on holiday.
They’re always friendly and sociable.

Employer: Ok. Have you any work experience?
*hoewel have you in het Brits Engels mogelijk is zul je meestal de constructie do you have of have you got tegenkomen*
Applicant: Yes, I’ve worked at the market at a fruiterer,
when I was twelve years old, but I moved away to another city. That’s the reason that I stopped with the job.

Employer: Ok, that sounds very good.
And did you get on with people? Because, you always have to work with people, children but adults as well.
For example at the swimming pool and at the activities for the children.

Applicant: Yes, of course. I never had any big problems with people.

Employer: When do you want to start?

Applicant: I think in about 2 weeks, because I have school and a lot of exams to do.
Employer: And what kind of position at the camping do you want?

Applicant: What are the positions?

Employer: The positions are: bath superintendent, organising activities or working in the kitchen in a restaurant.

Applicant: I’m doubting between the bath superintendent or working in the restaurant.

Employer: Ok. You must know it after 2 weeks.
*above kan alleen in de betekenis van boven worden gebruikt*
Employer: You must be at the reception at 10 o'clock in the morning. Have you some questions about the job?

Applicant: Yes. What would my salary be?

Employer: I think four pounds an hour.

Applicant: Great, thanks.

Employer: Ok. We will be seeing each other after 2 weeks.

Applicant: Goodbye then, Marcel.

Employer: Goodbye.