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[M'oek]

Hoi!
jah umm..ik verveelde me een avondje en toen is dit ''gedicht'' er zeg maar uit gekomen. Ik denk alleen dat het niet echt ergens op slaat en me engels zal ook wel weer niet goed zijn. Maargoed tog plaats ik het maar ben wel benieuwd naar jullie reacties, wat die ook moge zijn

A confusing/weird day, a day we all have from time to time

I’m sitting alone in the dark
waiting of my special friend, his name is mark

I know there is something wrong
Someone was here, here were he didn’t belong

Most of the time I’m glad to be home alone
But now my mind feels like a stone..

I’m locked up in this creepy place
O please don’t laugh, this is a serious case..

The hole house is a mess..
I know life don’t give you always Happiness

My friend won’t answer his telephone
Now I feel even more alone

I make myself crazy
So I have to relax and chill..
Because there mite be nobody in the house who’s here to kill

I look in my agenda and look at the date
And know I see the big mistake I made..

My grand-mother was her yesterday
To pick up some stuff to give away..

That’s explains why my house is turning up site down
And inside out,
Than I heard the doorbell it was really loud!

I open the door and mark smiled at me
In his hand he had my front door key

When I saw his smile and I saw his hand,
I realize that this day still has an happy end

[Halogeen]

A confusing/weird day, a day we all have from time to time

I’m sitting alone in the dark
waiting for my special friend, his name is mark

I know there is something wrong
Someone was here, here where he didn’t belong

Most of the time I’m glad to be home alone
But now my mind feels like stone.. (niet: voelt als een steen >.> = a stone )

I’m locked up in this creepy place
O please don’t laugh, this is a serious case..

The whole house is a mess..
I know life doesn't always give you Happiness

My friend won’t answer his telephone
Now I feel even more alone

I make myself crazy
So I have to relax and chill..
Because there (mite lol, doe maar might) be nobody in the house who’s here to kill

I look in my agenda and look at the date
And I see the big mistake I made.. (laat 'know' maar weg)

My grandmother was her yesterday grandmother = 1woord
To pick up some stuff to give away..

That explains why my house is turning up site down niet: that is explains )
And inside out,
Then I heard the doorbell it was really loud!

I open the door and mark smiled at me
In his hand he had my frontdoor key

When I saw his smile and I saw his hand,
I realize that this day still has an happy end


Geloof het of niet, maar na regel 4 wist ik al hoe het zou gaan eindigen >.>. De spellings- en taalfouten zijn natuurlijk om te huilen. En dan ben ik nog een leek qua Engels.

[M'oek]

je hebt weer gelijk engels is ook echt te moeilijk voor mij, ik ga het denk ik maar eens verder in het nederlands proberen. toch bedankt voor je reactie.. grtjs