gedicht :)

[pompidom]

Heey, dit is geloof ik mijn eerste gedicht die ik er maar ff op zet Dit is ook mijn eerste eh topic & post hier op scholieren.
In het Nederlands kan ik geen gedichten schrijven
Hier komt ie:

I came at this road
A long road, from the begin until the end of life
With all new things to learn and do
A way to avoid the pain and sadness
It seemed a way out
A way to understand yourself
But this road, is difficult to see
Some people don’t dare
If you see it in your life
Make this choice together
Run happy trough this road
And in the end, dying satisfied
But I don’t have someone to make this journey with
It feels like I’m screaming in front of the start
With a big wall in front of me to block this road
And nobody to help me
So I will remember this journey trough my life I never made,
And after that,
always standing still at the same point in my life
Die unknown
But if you would like to make this decision with me
Would you make this journey with me in heaven?

[kleine_ikke]

hmmm...geen mooie doorloping (?)...njah t hapert met lezen...


de zinnen inkorten?


kan beter! maar zeker geen slechte eerste poging