*Engels* Before water was Green *Engels*

[Secreet]

Mjaja een Engels gedicht van mij...komt niet vaak voor...heb letterlijk gehuild bij het schrijven van dit, tis erg persoonlijk, zou het daarom nooit op muziek kunnen zetten...ben benieuwd...

Before water was Green


I always guessed where the story would end,
Didn't knew it but I had it always right.
The bond between is was stronger than all that,
and there I was, sitting not alone without you.

And without you I can't cry.
The pain took my tears and made them dry,
and I'm not empty without you,
I'm just a better me.

Don't look over the shoulder when there's a road ahead,
that's one of the things you always said.
And You where right, before me is life,
Behind me is just an empty bed.

And what is small can be so strong,
that's what you meant with me,
that's how life is and so it will be.

But what is wrong couldn't be right,
I can't give you up without a fight,
against the lonlyness outside.

Why can't they understand how we feel,
the days with you where really real.
And whatever they said, we didn't care,
cause you where here or I was there.

And there I am, alone with you,
in my heart you'll alway's be.
From the clouds you look down on me,
and whatever you feel, I feel.

Always keep remembering me,
and the way I feel for you, you said.
And I said back, and really meant it,
How could I ever forget...

[tacidvs]

Het is goed geschreven, je komt 'op gang' naarmate het gedicht vordert, aan het eind wordt het mooi triest. Soort van levensverhaal. Misschien een idee om het begin, eerste vier strofen, te herschrijven?