5 days

[moenbase]

Five days has gone by
Now, the time ain't right you see
I know, but let me try to reach our goal
You're gone, almost a week, it's friday

Look, it should've been so damn great...
The clouds wouldn't block the sun anymore
If you were here, we will be 'us' again
Ok, it's been some time now, but it's never late

I promise you, if you can't make paradise
Then please let me guide you through hell
'cause all I want is to be with you,
With all your trues and your tiny lies

So let your hair hang down for a while
I don't care, you're beautiful, you always will be
The sparks are gone, they're almost black
So put off those sad eyes and start to smile

Let't travel through my heart
Hand upon hand, side by side
I'll carry you down to yours
And we'll make another start




5 dagen, en ik vind deze verschrikkelijk niet-ok

[BitterTear]

de eerste 2 strofes vind ik ronduit mierzoet en walgelijk maar de laatsten zijn beter. Mischien kan je beter de eerste 2 weg halen

[moenbase]

BitterTear schreef:
de eerste 2 strofes vind ik ronduit mierzoet en walgelijk maar de laatsten zijn beter. Mischien kan je beter de eerste 2 weg halen

'k vind em ook niet ok nee....


sorry dak em toch post