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[pluisje28]

Hallo iedereen

Zou iemand van jullie misschien deze tekst willen nakijken op spellingsfouten, grammaticafouten, zinsbouw, woordgebruik en welluidendheid. Het zou me echt helpen

I was born on March 4 1997 In Mol. I was tall, a little bit fat and I had fair hair. In the beginning I cried a lot: in the morning, at noon, in the afternoon, in the evening, I cried all the time. When I was young I ate a lot. It didn't matter what I ate really everything. When I was 1 I learned to walk and when I was 1.5 I could walk on my one. At age2 I said my first full sentences. A very big moment for me was my first day at the nursery school . I was 3 then. It was a very emotional day and cried a lot but after a few days I already had many new friends. My fifth birthday was very special. I got my first dirt-bike then. I was very happy because it was my dream to have my own dirt bike. After 3.5 years at the nursery school I went to the primary school in Ezaart. It was a completely different school for me because my nursery school was in Heide-Huize. I liked to learn how to write and read. We had very good and very bad teachers. I didn't get any problems with the different subjects. My favourite subject was calculating. I was a good boy, my parents rarely putted me in the corner or sent me to my room. I didn't talk too much in class. I was a quite boy. My Mum and my Dad had both a job. So I stayed at my grandparents or went to a day nursery after school. That was a nice time. I didn't have a real hobby but I tried a lot of sports myself.

alvast bedankt

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I was tall, a little bit fat and I had fair hair Wat bedoel je hier mee? Eerlijk haar?

It didn't matter what I ate really everything. Deze zin lijkt me niet kloppend. I ate everything, no matter what, lijkt me beter.

When I was 1 I learned how to walk and when I was 1.5 I could walk on my one. One moet zijn: own

I was 3 then Deze zin lijkt me ook niet kloppend. I was three (years old) at the time.

It was a very emotional day and cried a lot, but after a few days I already had many new friends. Ik twijfel over deze zin, wellicht is het goed, maar ik zou ervan maken: but after a few days, I had already made many new friends.

It was a completely different school for me because my nursery school was in Heide-Huize. Volgens mij is het niet zozeer het gebruik van Engels wat hier niet goed gaat, maar wat je hier precies mee zegt. Je zegt nu: Het was een hele andere school voor mij, omdat mijn kleuterschool in Heide-Huize was. Het is inderdaad een andere school dan je kleuterschool, niet alleen voor jou, maar voor iedereen. Ik denk dat je eigenlijk wilt zeggen dat het een grote overgang was, een grote verandering voor jou? Dan zou ik iets zeggen als: It was a huge change for me, in plaats van a completery different school.

I liked to learn how to write and read. Ik zou hiervan maken: I liked learning how to write and read.

I didn't get any problems with the different subjects. I didn't have any problems....

My favourite subject was calculating. I was a good boy, my parents rarely putted me in the corner or sent me to my room. Wat een ontzettend rare overgang. Bruggetje hiertussen misschien? Los daarvan: putted is fout, moet zijn 'put'. En ik zou niet zeggen 'I was a good boy', maar het is niet fout.

I was a quite boy. Quite is fout, dat moet zijn 'quiet'.

My Mum and my Dad had both a job. My Mum and Dad both had a job.

I didn't have a real hobby but I tried a lot of sports myself. Ik zou myself weglaten.

En even iets wat niets met het Engels an sich te maken heeft, maar met algemene regels van geschreven taal: Getallen onder de 20 schrijf je voluit, dus niet 1, maar one.

[Geel]

Fair hair betekent 'blond haar'. Dus die zin klopt prima.