27-10-2001, 20:42
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Our Secret Place
Walking around the city at nigth, Surging for my parents, They left me when I was just a little kid, I couldn’t find them, But I did found him. From the moment I saw you, I knew you were the one, And talking to you made it clear, Love at first site is not a ferrytale, It can be reality. Before I knew he gave me a adress, He said: meet me here at ten, It’s a real special place, For you and me, So I hope to see you there. Refrein We’d go to our secret place, The place only you and I know, Our relationship is a secret, But I don’t mind at all, Because here I can be myself. We talk about books and staff, We watch to the stars all night, And we hold each others hands, And keep each other warm, With you, the one I love. For a few dates we went there, And he helped me find my mom, But she don’t aproves our love, Because he’s to old for me, And she’s his ex mistress. Refrein Normally we’d go to our secret place, The place only you and I know, Our relationship is a secret, But I don’t mind at all, Because here I can be myself. We talk about books and staff, We watch to the stars all night, And we hold each others hands, And keep each other warm, With you, the one I love. Well love at first site is nice till it ends, I guess we were just to young to love, Guess it was just not meant to be, Refrein But I still remember the dates to our secret place, The place only you and I know, Our relationship is a secret, But I don’t mind at all, Because here I can be myself. We talk about books and staff, We watch to the stars all night, And we hold each others hands, And keep each other warm, With you, the one I love. (  had heel leuk id, was halverwege, maar is helemaal niet geworden wat ik wilde, damn, maar ja, zie maar wat jullie hiervan vinden...)[Dit bericht is aangepast door Gothic (27-10-2001).]
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~ Maybe it won’t last forever, but who says the best loves do ~ November is all I know, and all I ever wanted to know ~
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28-10-2001, 11:30
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owkee kenlijk zijn jullie het met me eens, maar zet dat dan neer dat jullie het slecht vinden ofzo
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~ Maybe it won’t last forever, but who says the best loves do ~ November is all I know, and all I ever wanted to know ~
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29-10-2001, 07:00
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helemaal onderaan, moest dus weer uppen
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29-10-2001, 16:44
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Oe, heb jij ook al last van het grote Genegeerd-Worden-syndroom?
Leuk gedichtje trouwens. Ik vind het Engels hier alleen niet zo mooi, maar daar kan ik doorheen lezen  Love
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29-10-2001, 18:06
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29-10-2001, 18:18
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Citaat:
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29-10-2001, 21:55
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Citaat:
, had hem nog niet gezien, maar is mooie reactie onder geplaatst ...verder nog iemand die de moeite heeft genomen dit te lezen?
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~ Maybe it won’t last forever, but who says the best loves do ~ November is all I know, and all I ever wanted to know ~
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29-10-2001, 22:19
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Kijk jij As the World Turnes????
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29-10-2001, 22:37
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Lijkt een beetje op k's choice
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30-10-2001, 06:59
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Citaat:
 , ja daar is het een beetje op geinspireert, net als het liedje van westlife wat ik ergens een keer hoorde, en eigen gevoel, van alles wat dus...k'choise? compliment?
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