Extended Meatphor Poetry... Reacties graag!

[Vaishnavi]

Hier een 'extended metaphor poem'. Reageer ajb met reacties en/of suggesties. Thnx!


Ferriswheel


Life was like a ferriswheel
you start at the very bottom, slowly
rising to the highest point
The view is beuatiful
and you can almost touch the sky
Everything seems clearer now
you can feel your soul take off
and fly
But after those few seconds
of freedom, when you thought you had it all
when you almost touched the sky
the stars come crashing down
Then you check back into reality
you find yourself in line
And you look up at that ferriswheel
thinking,
"How I wish the sky was mine..."

[Hannibal]

Loopt lekker,

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