ja sorry heb gennen titel voor dit dit is wel mijn eerste gedicht

[liesemies]

Though I know my heart wil be torn
My love for you is already born
I want this so much
I can't resist to touch

Be mine till our love has no use in this world of war
Be mine till there's no shining star
Be mine on this adventure of love, oh so far

Cuz you and I both know we can make this right
Let's dance on that ray of light
Cuz you and I know I love you more then flowers need rain
So show me that world, where there's no pain

Cuz this feeling has never spoken so loud to me
I think about you daily
So please share me your heart
And I'll be true to you from the start

willen jullie aub reageren op dit gedichtje het is mijn eerste in het engels en had het geschreven omdat ik over mijn oren verliefd was maar dat is nu helaas over dikke soewn