help: mondeling, wie wil me helpen

[fib]

Ik heb binnenkort mondeling, dit is absoluut niet mijn sterkste vak, eerder mijn zwakste. Ik denk dat ik net als de vorige keer maar tekstjes uit me hoofd ga leren. Kan iemand de volgende vertaling even voor me verbeteren

Tekstje gaat over mijn rat
Elke avond deed ik het deurtje open, ze klom zelf op me schouder. Dan gingen we saampjes tv kijken, computeren. En als ik geen zin in haar had, dan liep ze rond op de eettafel, de badkamer of het bed van mijn ouders. Zomers gingen we wandelen met de hond. Dus elke dag had ik haar op mijn lichaam lopen, bovendien was ze zindelijk, dat schept wel een hele sterke band.

Ze was oud, had problemen met haar organen. S’nachts was ze overleden in mijn handen.
S’nachts

Evry evening I put the door open. Ze walked over mij arm to my shoulder. And than I watsching tv, playing computer games. Wen I don’t had time for her than I put her on the eating tabel, in the badroom, or on the bed of my parents. In the sommer sometimes we make trips with the dog. Evry day she was on my body, I trust her, she trust me, she was clean. So we had a good relationship.

She was old, had problems with hare organs. In the night I didn’t go to bed, I was sitting on a chair. A few ouers later she was dead.

Ik hoop iemand zo gek te krijgen om mij te helpen

ik zou het zo vertalen:


Every night I opened the door. she walked on my shoulder all by hersellf. And then we watched tv, played computer games. When I didn't had time for her, I put her on the eating tabel, in the badroom, or on the bed of my parents. In the summer sometimes we made trips with the dog. Every day she was on my body, I trusted her, she trusted me, she was clean. So we had a good relationship.

She was old, had problems with her organs. In the night I didn’t went to bed, I was sitting on a chair. A few hours later she had died.

[Balance]

Every evening I opened the door. She walked over my arm to my shoulder. We watched TV or played games on the computer. When I didn’t had time for her, I put her on the dining-table, in the bathroom or in my parent's bed. Sometimes we made a journey in the summer, together with the dog. I held her on my body everyday and I trusted her like she trusted me. Fortunately, she was clean. It's clear that my rat and I had a good relationship.

She was old, had problems with her organs. One night, I didn’t go to bed, I was sitting on a chair. A few hours later she was dead.

Dit is in ieder geval al een behoorlijke verbetering, maar ik kan niet garanderen dat er geen foutjes meer in zitten.
Een paar zinnetjes heb ik iets mooier laten lopen of iets veranderd, maar veelal is het nog hetzelfde als wat jij zei.

Het is niet: I didn't went to bed, maar I didn't go to bed

Balance was net iets eerder die van jou is goed

[Briseïs]

I didn't have time for her.

of 'had no time...'

[Liesjeuh]

Every evening I opened the door. She walked over my arm to my shoulder. We watched TV or played games on the computer. When I didn’t have time for her, I put her on the dining table , in the bathroom or in my parents's bed. Sometimes in summer we went for a walk, together with the dog. I held her on my body every day and I trusted her like she trusted me. Fortunately, she was clean. It's obvious my rat and I had a good relationship.

She was old and had problems with her organs. One night, I didn’t go to bed, I was sitting on a chair. A few hours later she died.