[song tekst] just denying

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Geen gedicht maar een tekst voor een nummer. Graag commentaar, wat er slecht/goed aan is, wat beter kan.

Een nummer dat gaat over loslaten (van een situatie)
Persoon A (drager perspectief) & B delen een 'verleden' en gingen na die tijd nog beiden de 'fout' in. Ze zitten nu in een vervelende situatie - veel ruzie enz.
Persoon A wil de goede kant van B weer zien. (I already missed your good side for way too long / I want to get you back!)
Misschien zijn zij te blind (en 'in denial') en is het allemaal veel simpeler en moeten zij het dus van een andere kant bekijken en het loslaten. Opnieuw beginnen.

__+__JUST__DENYING__+__

VERSE A:
You only 'asked' me, this time
Evaluating considered thoughts and feelings
But I'm only trying to give you my best
And I'm not yours, you're not mine
The thing is girl, _forget_our_past_
We'll be fine, we'll be fine!

PRECHORUS1:
We're getting off track
Is it too late to get back?
We've changed, we've changed...
Maybe it's my fault... (my fault)

CHORUS 1:
I should just shut up and listen!
We have to figure out the parts we're missing
There are things going horribly wrong
No reason, no use for fighting and crying
I already missed your good side for way too long
Maybe we're losing grip - We're just denying

VERSE B:
It's over, I already told you that
Somehow, I struggled with that myself
Lured you into something impossible
It was best if things were left unsaid
Save yourself, save yourself!

PRECHORUS2:
We're getting off track
Is it too late to get back?
We've changed, we've changed...
You tell me it's my fault...? (my fault)

CHORUS 2:
Can't you just shut up and listen!
We have to figure out the parts we're missing
There are things going horribly wrong
No reason, no use for fighting and crying
I already missed your good side for way too long
Maybe we're losing grip - We're just denying

BRIDGE:
Can't we just be quiet...
Get up, get up and walk away
Let's leave us nowhere
Let's leave us nowhere
Leave us, there
Nowhere
And start all over again
I want to get YOU BACK!

CHORUS 3:
We should just shut up and listen!
We have to figure out the parts we're missing
There are things going horribly wrong
No reason, no use for fighting and crying
I already missed your good side for way too long
Maybe we're losing grip - We're just denying