mijn laatste bericht willen jullie dit ff..

[robba34]

willen jullie dit eventjes nakijken en misschien iets verbeteren een mooier verhaal betere zinnen ofzo

this is my first time in London
can you tell me what I can do here in England
what advises you me ....the bigben maybe?
I go tomorrow with my brother to the big Ben
it seems me fantastic!!!!

I can make there also a trip concerning the rivers in London
I rent a boat and necessary what friends, weet you perhaps how expensive that is

that is on the high side

what find you of the Netherlands, sir
I find the Netherlands the most beautiful country

[Mother Earth]

I've never been in London before, so this is the first time I'm here. Probably you can tell me some nice places I can visit here in England.
What do you advise me? The Bigben perhaps?
Tomorrow I'm going to see the Bigben, together with my brother. To me it seems really fantastic.

Probably I'm going to make a boattrip on the Thames, a river in London. I can rent a boat and call some friends. Do you know how much that costs?

What do you think about the Netherlands, sir? In my opinion it's a very beautiful and nice country.

[Sweetsurrender]

That is on the high side --> That's rather expensive.
En wat bedoel je met: ''And necessary'' ?
Ik denk dat je hiervan : ''And equipment'' moet maken.
Verder is de tekst van Mother Earth goed.