Mening....

[dream-chaser]

Ik schrijf behoorlijk veel teksten, vaak over dingen in de maatschappij en gewoon in de wereld. Zoals deze:

Turn on T.V., watch the news
Read the paper, you see there is nothing to lose
You see where the world is going to now
And I ask myself why and how

Every where is war and fight
Everybody knows it's not allright
All war created by human mind
This human race you cannot call kind

War and what it's all about
In the name of god you here them shout out loud
The government don't seem to care
They don't see what's right or fare

These sick people want to reclaim there rights
And let there people fight all those nights
They don't know what they're doing is wrong
Thinkin' of god makes them strong

They only ruin people's lifes
Even children fight with guns and knifes
People here Don't hear their words
It's the government who causes all the words

War and what it's all about
In the name of god you here them shout out loud
The government don't seem to care
They don't see what's right or fare

Most of the people want to run away
The government wants them to stay
Because the more people are gone
Less hurt can be done

Ik zou hier graag wat reacties op willen krijgen over wat jullie hier van vinden.

je kan helaas duidelijk zien dat engels niet je beste taal is
de boodschap is wel ok

[berteltje]

Ik ben het met Ash'Gaion eens, Engels is niet je beste taal, tenminste ik heb nog nooit iets van je in het Nederlands gelezen, maar goed. Ik zou een paar dingetjes veranderen, zodat het iets beter past in het ritme van de gehele tekst past

Turn on T.V., watch the news
Read the paper, you see there is nothing to lose
You see where the world is going to now
And I ask myself why and how

Every where is war and fight
Everybody knows it's not allright
All war created by human mind
This human race you cannot call kind

War and what it's all about
In the name of god you here them shout
The government don't seem to care
They don't see what's right or fare

These sick people want to reclaim there rights
And let there people fight all those nights
They don't know what they're doing is wrong
Thinkin' of god makes them strong

They only ruin other people's lifes
Even children fight with guns and knifes
People here Don't hear their words
It's the government who causes all the words

War and what it's all about
In the name of god you here them shout
The government don't seem to care
They don't see what's right or fare

Most of the people want to run away
The government wants them to stay
Because the more people are gone
Less hurt can be done


Liefs Kimry