A Sister Dies

[AnTaRTiCa]

I see it
All my fears
Starting with one drop of blood
I follow it
My eyes tracing the path of red stains
Lost hopes
I come to her room
The blood on her door handle scares me
I know what I will find
I open the door
Her blood is still sticky and warm against my hand
I walk in
See her laying on her bed
Pooled in red
It always was her favorite color
Her hand moves
Cutting deeper and deeper
Moving down her arms
Up her legs
Across her stomach
I run up
Grabbing her hand
So slippery
I can't grip it hard enough to stop her
Please.......stop hurting yourself....please stop
Her eyes glazed
Not even here
She is gone into her own world
I finally stop her hand long enough
Pinning it to the bed I take away the knife
She eyes glaze into my face
Focusing for one moment
Lara?
I smile through tears
Please stop
Her hand reaches for the knife again
It helps me..please give it back....I need it....
Please give it back
I hold it away from her
Watching how frantic she is
Trying to get her to lay still so she will not bleed so fast
Deep down knowing she will die no matter what
Yet needing to try.
She goes crazy
I hate you
You want them to take me
You are on their side
With strength you should not have had
You push me away
Spring at me
Dripping all over your floor
You grab the knife from my hand
Swinging it towards me
I scream and fling my arms out
Trying to stop you
The knife in your hand
Slices through my arms
You keep cutting
Screaming you hate me
That I want them to get you
Tears pour down
I can't say anything
Still you stab
The knife passes through my ribs
Into a lung
I slowly start falling to the floor
You wonder off towards your bed
Cutting yourself
Muttering that you are not crazy
And they can't have you
Your strength gone
You start to fall
Sinking into the red floor
Your eyes start to clear in the moments before death
You cry out when you see me
Laying in the corner
Bleeding
My blood rushing to mingle with yours
Your hand reaches out
Lara.......I'm sorry...........god........I am crazy
You start to cry
I find some strength and reach your side
My breathing becoming louder........more gurgled
Shhhhh, no your not crazy
Shhhhhhh It's ok, you are just confused
Still you cry
PLease for give me Lara...please...I'm soo sorry........I love you
I know, shhhhhhhhh I forgive you
I know it wasn't you
I kiss a pale spot on her forehead
The only place not bloody
She starts screaming that they got her
Too please not let them hurt her anymore
She dies then
In my arms
Her blood slowing
My vision starts to fade
I look over
I need help
The phone is so far away
My hand reaches
Coming no where close
It falls back to my side
I hold her close
Wait for me sister.......
I'll help you.........Just wait for me.

[moondancer]

wooooow kreeg er echt kippen vel va,!!
fantastisch geschreven
xx

[AnTaRTiCa]

hihi bedankt

[iamre18]

Mooi, indringend verhalend verteld

[I Need You]

Ik vind deze zo mooi dat ik er helemaal stil van ben..

Ik heb er eigenlijk geen andere woorden te zeggen hoe mooi deze is

Groetjes Danielle

[berteltje]

Wooooow, weer een meesterwerkje.
Het lijkt vind ik altijd, meer op een verhaaltje dan een gedicht, maar zeker echt super....

Liefs kimry

[AnTaRTiCa]

hihi dankje welllieeeeee

[bengelke]

gelezen met tranen in de oogjes

[Embraced Pale Death]

Ik vind soms de zinnetjes een beetje kort...
maar ik denk als ik het gewoon hoor en het wordt goed voorgedragen opt juiste tempo, dat het dan een stuk beter is.
Ik denk duz dat het beter zou zijn als het werd verteld of nen liedje ofzo, maar dat neemt niet weg dattet wel een goede sfeer heeft.

zo, had ik ff zin in reageren, zeg...

[Rrr.]

*kippevel*