Till I Met You

[Jesse_For You]

Not so long ago my love
I was dissing the man above
I was whinning about fate
Everyday I was crying consumed with hate

Till you came along
And sang to me that beautiful song
Filling me with exstacy
I had never been so happy

And saw how I had been wasting it all
unaware untill I heard you call
Your voice so sweet I'd never heard
It's whisteling sounds like a bird

Chirping at me with your gracieus smile
I tend to drown in it every once in a while
Drown inside all that is you
Cause I never knew

Love could be so satisfying to the heart
Girl, now that you're here let's never part
cause the love that I have
for you is designed to make you laugh

To make the world a brighter place
And in return I get to see your beautiful face
Lighting up my entire world
Thank god you are my girl

[berteltje]

Vinnum erg mooi! Hij spreekt me gewoon aan. Kan je helaas niet vertellen waarom.
Liefs kimry

[tacidvs]

Jesse_For You schreef:
was whinning about fate
'whinning'=?
'fate' is 'faith'?

Wat een idiote manier van quoten, al die kleur-tags weghalen... maarja. Gedicht is een beetje cliché.