[ENG]Cliffhanger

[templarrush]

We call an unfinished story a cliffhanger. You finish the story. You get the introduction and you add the further development of the plot and the ending. You’d better use a dictionary if you want to produce a nice story. (online: look in Google – online dictionaries ).

Use vocabulary that really describes the situation.
The structure of your part of the story must contain the following parts:
- the discovery of something astonishing…
- which suddenly becomes threatening…
- a sudden turn of events, which solves the problem
- a happy ending

Underwater World (Story started by Cassie, aged 12, from London)
Introduction
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The sea was just as beautiful underwater. Tropical fish swam in between the garlands of seaweed, while anemones in all different colours open and shut. Pebbles and shells were scattered on the sea floor, in different shapes and sizes. Oysters revealed milky pearls in between their jaws. The coral reef nearby was particularly clear that day. Limpets clung to rocks, while the occasional dolphin could be seen, jumping out of the water. It was such a wonderful sensation to be a part of this peaceful, undisturbed world. It was so different from the hustle and bustle of the city above them. It was magical.



als er iemand zo'n huiswerk al gemaakt heeft, gelieve mij dan de rest van het verhaal te geven he ;

't Is de bedoeling dat jij de rest van het verhaal zelf verzint. Probeer het eerst een zelf, dan kijken wij het wel na.

[templarrush]

ik vind dat zo moeilijk

You finish the story. You get the introduction and you add the further development of the plot and the ending. You’d better use a dictionary if you want to produce a nice story. (online: look in Google – online dictionaries ).

Use vocabulary that really describes the situation.
The structure of your part of the story must contain the following parts:
- the discovery of something astonishing…
- which suddenly becomes threatening…
- a sudden turn of events, which solves the problem
- a happy ending

Good luck!

templarrush schreef op 11-11-2006 @ 18:25 :
ik vind dat zo moeilijk

En het wordt er niet makkelijker op als je het nooit probeert. Probeer het eens zelf, zet je resultaat hier neer en dan kijken wij het wel na.

[templarrush]

In the meantime Little Willy was fishing. Once he got a shark hooked and the shark dragged him in the sea. Little Willy lost his leg and he lost a lot of blood. Then he knew he wouldn’t survive this disaster. But he saw suddenly a boat far away. He was shouting. The boat went in the way of him. Little Willy was saved, for the moment. He was very weak and nobody was able to help him. He told his friends what he was thinking. They thought that the devil was calling Willy. They threw him into the sea. Little Willy drowned. And for more than 10 Years, his friends couldn’t sleep because Little Willy’s ghost was hunting their souls. They played suicide and the soul of Little Willy found peace.


is dit een goed vervolg, als sommige zinnen beter konden geformuleerd worden zeg het ook maar