my hero

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My Hero

My heroe is a man who is seventy seven years old who got a transplantation of the heart since eighteen years and he stills have a good humour.
He is my grandfather by the law of my mother.

He lose his father when he is eight years old,he has to work to help his family and to pay his studies.
My grandfather meet my grandmother at his eighteen
that comes of a rich family and she push him to continue studying to progress his position.
He gets married when he becomes twenty-eight years being already the auxiliary of the bank, he begins to construct buildings and he persists studying.
At his forty he arrives to be the director of the bank, building more and more and has four children.
When he becomes the age of forty-six, he is on his third year of jurisprudence and he almost do his exam of English with the charges of five children.
His career is interrupting by a serie of infarcts that lets
him incompetent to continue working.

He is a hero for me because he was able without help to establish a splendid career and a great fortune.He could also pay the university studies for all his five children with a high level of life uppermost.

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