[ENGELS]Kan iemand mijn formele engels brief nakijken??? snel het is voor morgen pls

[yamitommie]

Adres

30 January 2008


Adres


Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Tomas, I am a boy living in The Netherlands and I am 15 years old. I have red the article about the Camelford pollution in the local newspaper.

This story speaks to me because I can not understand how this all could happen. And I am wondering, why din’t the Water Authority just tell that the water was poisoned. It could save lots of healths. What I think is strange is that it was clearly the Water Authority vault, so why didn’t they pay the people who where sick at the time of the poisoned water or who still are sick a fair compensation.

I hope that the investigation that was started in 2005 will be in profit of the people of Camelford. And that the Water Authority admits that this problem was their vault. Hopefully the residents can get their life’s back properly.



Yours faithfully,

handtekening

Naam

kan iemand mij helpen??? het is voor morgen, ik ben nooit goed in brieven dus pls