Engels eMail-Hoe het universum is ontstaan

Om m'n engels een beetje te oefenen!
Ik zou het fijn vinden als jullie de fouten eruit zouden kunnen halen.
Ook de fouten in mijn beschrijving (dingen die niet kloppen over het ontstaan van materie en dat soort dingen)
Ik heb zeer mijn best gedaan op deze eMail.

Dank jullie zeer!

Groetjes van Miran!

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Sorry! I hope I didn't insult you with the 'old', haha. In Dutch it sounds better.
I didn't mean to be mean, haha.

I finally know what I want to do later!
I'm thinking something like industrial designer or something like that.

Oh, the names of the Dutch people don't sound Dutch at all.
Never heard them before.
Maybe you spelled it wrong. Or they just have special names, that's possible too.


Well, most scientists say, there was this big bang (a bit vague, I know) and then there were atoms.

(It's very hard to try say this in english, all the annoying words. Don't know if it's right, but I hope

you understand.) Not so much though. out of that more new sorts of atoms originated.

Combinations of this we call matter.
Well, that's how (they say.), the universe originated.
What we do know, is that the universe is immensely big, and there are millions of different

star-systems.
(Do you believe in alien life? I do. In such a big universe it's stupid to think we are the only living

and intelligent creatures. On our tiny planet. I mean, the sun also is just a star. And how many stars

can we already see (with the bare eye)? that's very cool I think.)
Life on earth also started with the atoms. Monocellular creatures and stuff came first. Bacteria. As

time went on more complex life got to developement.
But yeah, it's a hard question what life is exactly. In old times they thought only people were

concious and had a soul, or also could feel pain. You could say the monocellular creature only is a

machine, a thing just functioning by reacting on its surroundings. It doesn't feel anything. When did

life become living then? The worms or jellyfish? Or do they have to be more intelligent? Are we

also just machines? What is the Soul? Good to think about but it hurts my brain, haha.

Doesn't the Bible also say God created the sun?
I think that's really interesting.
As the sun is only a star. There might be a hidden meaning (wink).
Hm religion is interesting I think. Maybe I'm going to study that later, haha.

Oh my I got really off-topic. I don't even know what I wanted to say anymore, haha!
I'm going now, thanks for the reply.

Yours faithfully,

Miranda
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[mathfreak]

*ik geef hieronder de tekst met de nodige correcties weer*
Sorry! I hope I didn't insult you with the 'old', haha. In Dutch it sounds better.
I didn't mean to be mean, haha.

I finally know what I want to do later!
I think something like an industrial designer or something like that.

Oh, the names of the Dutch people don't sound Dutch at all.
Never heard them before.
Maybe you spelled it wrong. Or they just have special names, that's possible too.


Well, most scientists say, there was this Big Bang (a bit vague, I know) and then there were atoms.

(It's very hard to try say this in English, all the annoying words. Don't know if it's right, but I hope you understand.) Not so much though. Out of that more new kinds of atoms originated.

Combinations of this is called matter.
Well, that's how (they say), the universe originated.
What we do know, is that the universe is immensely big, and there are millions of different
stellar systems.
(Do you believe in alien life? I do. In such a big universe it's stupid to think we are the only living and intelligent creatures. On our tiny planet. I mean, the sun also is just a star. And how many stars can we already see (with the naked eye)? That's very cool I think.)

Life on Earth also started with the atoms. Monocellular creatures and stuff came first. Bacteria. As time went on more complex life got to developement.
But yeah, it's a hard question what life is exactly. In old times they thought only people were concious and had a soul, or also could feel pain. You could say the monocellular creature only is a machine, a thing just functioning by reacting on its surroundings. It doesn't feel anything. When did life become living then? The worms or jellyfish? Or do they have to be more intelligent? Are we also just machines? What is the Soul? Good to think about but it hurts my brain, haha.

Doesn't the Bible also say God created the Sun?
I think that's really interesting.
As the Sun is only a star. There might be a hidden meaning (wink).
Hm religion is interesting I think. Maybe I'm going to study that later, haha.

Oh my I got really off-topic. I don't even know what I wanted to say anymore, haha!
I'm going now, thanks for the reply.

Yours,

Miranda
*Yours faithfully gebruik je alleen in een formele brief als degene aan wie je schrijft niet bekend is*

Bedankt hoor!

Groetjes van Miran!

[Geel]

Sorry! I hope I didn't insult you with the 'old', haha. In Dutch it sounds better.
I didn't mean to be mean, haha.

I finally know what I want to do later!
I think something like an industrial designer or something like that.

Oh, the names of the Dutch people don't sound Dutch at all.
Never heard them before.
Maybe you spelled them wrong. Or they just have special names, that's possible too.


Well, most scientists say that there was this Big Bang (a bit vague, I know) and then there were atoms.

(It's very hard to try to say this in English, all the annoying words. Don't know if it's right, but I hope you´ll understand.) Not so much though. Out of those atoms more new kinds of atoms originated.

Combinations of this is called matter.
Well, that's how (they say), the universe originated.
What we do know, is that the universe is immensely big, and there are millions of different
stellar systems.
(Do you believe in alien life? I do. In such a big universe it's stupid to think we are the only living and intelligent creatures. On our tiny planet. I mean, the sun is also just a star. And how many stars can we already see (with the naked eye)? I think that´s very cool.)

Life on Earth also started with the atoms. Monocellular creatures and bacteria [In het engels gebruik je het woord 'stuff' niet in brieven. Het is niet gebruikelijk.] came first.As time went on more complex life got to developement.
But yeah, it's a hard question what life exactly is. In old times they thought only people were concious and had a soul, or [also past hier niet] could feel pain. You could say the monocellular creature is only a machine, a thing just functioning by reacting on its surroundings. It doesn't feel anything. When did life become living then? The worms or jellyfish? Or do they have to be more intelligent? Are we also just machines? What is the Soul? Good to think about but it hurts my brain, haha.

Doesn't the Bible also say God created the Sun?
I think that's really interesting.
As the Sun is only a star. There might be a hidden meaning (wink).
Hm, I think religion is interesting. Maybe I'm going to study that later, haha.

Oh my, I got really off-topic. I don't even know what I wanted to say anymore, haha!
I'm going now, thanks for the reply.

Yours,

Miranda