Gezocht iemand die een engelse tekstje na wilt kijken

[swolha]

Hoi,

Ik zoek iemand die mijn fouten uit een zelf geschreven engelse tekst kan halen. Het is nog geen half a4tje groot.
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Your name and e-mail adress was given to me by ....a teacher from me. First of all I would like to introduce mij self: my name is .... , i am sixteen years old and live in the Nederlands.

I have make a studytrip with my classmates to Odense in may this year. We have visted some daycare’s and instiontions for persons with disabilitys. A import difference for me is: the childeren have more freedom and space than the childeren in Netherlands at the early childhood centre’s. That’s make me happy. So after I have visitted Danmark was it clear for me. I would like to have a trainee ship in Danmark this year preferably at skovbørnehaven. I hope that this is possible. The period of this trainnee ship is februarie until juni, minimal three days of a week . (feb tot en met juni)

I have some questions. I hope you wille anser the questions. Could you give me some information about the taks of stagiares ? And what are your expectations of stagiares?

I hope to hear from you soon.


Alvast bedankt.

[Jan1991]

Your name and e-mail adress was given to me by XXXXX a teacher from me. First of all I would like to introduce my self: my name is .... , i am sixteen years old and live in the Nederlands.

I have make a studytrip with my classmates to Odense in may this year. We have visited some daycares a institution for persons with disability. (A import difference for me is)????
: the children have more freedom and space than the children in the Netherlands at the early childhood centre’s. That’s make me happy. So after I have visited Danemark was it clear for me. I would like to have a trainee ship in Danemark this year preferably at skovbørnehaven. I hope that this is possible. The period of this trainnee ship is February until june, minimal three days of a week . (From February till June)

I have some questions. I hope you will answer the questions. Could you give me some information about the taks of stagiares ? And what are your expectations of stagiares?

I hope to hear from you soon.


Alvast bedankt.[/QUOTE]


ben niet zo goed in engels, heb al fouten gevonden, staan vast meer in maar kan niks vinden.

[NaamInGebruik]

Your name and e-mail adress was given to me by ....a teacher from me. First of all I would like to introduce myself: my name is .... , i am sixteen years old and live in the Nederlands.

I have made a studytrip with my classmates to Odense in May this year. We have visted some daycare’s and an institution for peoplewith disabilities. An import difference for me is( the childeren have more freedom and space then (the) childeren in Netherlands at the early childhood centre’s. That(’s) makes me happy. So after I have visit(t)ed Denmark it was (it) clear for me. I would like to have a trainee ship in Denmark this year, preferably at skovbørnehaven. I hope that this is possible. The period of this trainee ship is Februarie until June, minimal three days in (a) week .

I have some questions. I hope you will(e) answer the questions. Could you give me some information about the tasks of stagiares ? And what are your expectations of stagiares?

I hope to hear from you soon.


Alles wat dikgedrukt is anders
Alles tussen haakjes en onderstreept weg laten
Alles wat scheef gedrukt is klinkt me raar in de oren maar weet ik zo ook niet, muv period, dat betekend ongesteld en is in die context dus fout.
Word heeft btw ook een spellingschecker, hell; mijn browser kan de spelling checken. Net als bij nederlandse teksten kan je er daarmee ook even over heen gaan, scheelt al veel fouten.

Ik hoop dat je er iets aan hebt, ik heb ipv je spelling/taal/gramma fouten eruit te halen(was geen beginnen aan) je hele tekst ff over nieuw geschreven. Ik ben er wel behoorlijk zeker van dat dit je een mooi cijfer opleverd, heb 5 jaar les in het engels gehad.



Your name and e-mail address has been given to me by XXX my XXX teacher. I would like to introduce myself first, I am XXX and I am xx years old. I currently live in the Netherlands.

This year I made a trip to Odense for school together with my fellow pupils. We visited some daycares and institutions designed for disabled people. It caught my attention that the children there have more room and space, than those raised under the same conditions here. I was glad to see such things. It was quiet obvious for me when I returned from my trip to Denmark, that I would like to have a traineeship in Skovbørnehaven. I have some preferences for Skovbørnehaven and hope it is possible to get to work there, in the period of February till June, with a minimum of three days a week.

As last I have some questions, I would be glad to be granted a respond.
Could you provide me with some information regarding the day to day tasks of a stagier?
What are your expectations of the people which work for you?

I hope to hear from you soon.

Regards,
(naam)

[June bug]

Zitten nog wel wat fouten in de tekst van thoesoe, ik zal ze dikgedrukt zetten hieronder:


Your name and e-mail address have been given to me by XXX my XXX teacher. I would like to introduce myself first, I am XXX and I am xx years old. I currently live in the Netherlands.

This year I made a trip to Odense for school together with my fellow pupils. We visited some daycares and institutions designed for disabled people. It caught my attention that the children there have more room and space, than those raised under the same conditions here. I was glad to see such things. It was quite obvious for me when I returned from my trip to Denmark, that I would like to have a traineeship in Skovbørnehaven. I have some preferences for Skovbørnehaven and hope it is possible to start working there in the period of February until June, with a minimum of three days a week.

Lastly, I have some questions, I would be glad to be granted a response.
Could you provide me with some information regarding the day to day tasks of a trainee?
What are your expectations of the people who work for you?

I hope to hear from you soon.

Regards,
(naam)