Engels verslag verbtereen!!!!

[Zelihadogan]

Hallo allemaal,

Ik moet een verslag maken voor engels dat meetelt voor m'n examen. Kunnen jullie mijn fouten misschien verbeteren?

Jane Eyre has lost her parents. Her uncle cared for her. But when her uncle died too her aunt Mrs Reed and her cousin John Reed, Elita and Gergiana treat her as a slave. One day Jane read a book. John saw that and he took it a way. When Jane left the room he threw it to her head. Jane is angry and she attacked him. Her aunt came in. As punishment she must go in the red room. That is the room where her uncle died. After a few hours , Jane can’t stan it out. She screams because she wants to go out of the room. But she can’t. the next day dr. Lloyd wanted to talk with Jane. Jane tolds everything what she thought of the house, her aunt and her cousins. She said also ,she wanted to go to school. Mr. Brocklehurst come to here. Her aunt and mr. Brocklehurst gave her a speech. They said that she goes to the hel. Next day they come to take Jane to Lowood. It’s her new school. The day when she is in Lowood they get burnt meal. She met a girl who calls Helen Burns. They talk about the school and the teachers. Next day Jane asks Helen why mrs. Scatchers punished her. She says that you must be friendly to your enemy. Later mr. Brocklehurst visits Lowood. When he saw Jane he ask her to sit on a chair. Then he tells the story when he and Jane talk. As punishment she must to stay 30 minutes on that chair. After that Helen comes to her an brought her some food. Mrs Temple wants to talk to those two girls. She ask the real story. Mrs Temple promis that everything will be alright. The winter is gone. But there is a typhus at Lowood. Jane has nothing but Helen has tuberculosis. Jane asks how she is and want to see her. But she should not. That night she goes to Helen and say goodbye. That morning mrs Temple saw that Jane sleeps next to Helen and that Helen is died. After many years jane become a tacher at Lowood. But when mrs Temple married and go away Jane don’t want to stay there. She puts a advertisement. Mrs Fairfax wants her. Jane moves to Thornfield. Mrs Fairfax is the cleaning lady of Thornfield. Adele is the pupil. One they Jane walks in the garden she saw a man who falls from his horse. It’was mr Rochester. When she get home they told her that the house owner was home. But she don’t know that she met him yet. He tolds Jane that he got a affair with the mum of Adele. Jane was walking around the house. She hears some weird noises. They said that it is the needlewoman of the house. That night Jane hears some laughing. When she looks she saws that mr Rochester is in a fire. The next day mr Rochester leaves the house. Later Jane talks with Clare Pool the needlewoman. She founds her a weird person. Also she hears something about mvr. Blanche. They say that she maybe has a relationship One day mr. Rochester comes back with a few people.