help me met engels

[merve58]

hey jongens ik moet een cv in het engels maken kunnen jullie alsjeblieft dit goed controleren?


Mark Sullivan
106 Piccadilly
Bristol
BS8 7TQ

17th March 2004

Dear Mr Mark,

I am writing to applying for the post of camp leader, which I saw advertised somewhere recently. This is my CV.
I look forward to hearing from you
Sincerely,
Merve Yildiz

Curriculum Vitae
Name: Merve Yildiz
DOB: 17-10-85
Adress: straat
Den Haag
Zuid-Holland postcode

Phone: 0701031146
Mobile: 0681645192

Profile: I have work a lot with old people, i know the interests from the old people and how you take care of old people. I talk to them, the old people or sick people love me because i play games with them and talk a lot about their problems.

Education: Stanislascollege Delft
Havo

Amsterdam HBO
Nursing education

Rotterdam Erasmus university
Psychology of old people

Work experience:

February 2005-2008
Nurse in the Erasmus university in Rotterdam

March 2008-2010
Care taker in a old people’s home

October 2010-2012
Worked in a madhouse as a psychiatrist

Interests: My interests are football, reading, travelling and cooking.

Additionals information: I played football with a girl team when I was eighteen years old, and when i was twelf years old my mother had learn me how to cooke a cheesecake. Now i am a very great cook. I love travelling because I see the world, i see different people and different culture and religions. I learn a lot during my travel days. I wish I could see Antarctica. I’am very curious for Antarctica.

References:

Sven de Buur
0681416329
Surgeon on Erasmus hospital

Laura van Dam
0698932547
Nurse in a old people’s home

Nico Driessen
0621456932
Director of the madhouse

Wat

[merve58]

checken of de spelling en grammatica goed is

Ja leuk. Je bent bijna 28 en gooit dit online?

[merve58]

neee hahaha ik ben 15 maar ik heb een neppe cvtje gemaakt,

merve58 schreef:

Mark Sullivan
106 Piccadilly
Bristol
BS8 7TQ

17th March 2004

Dear Mr Mark,

I am writing to applying for the post of camp leader, which I saw advertised somewhere recently. This is my CV.
I look forward to hearing from you
Sincerely,
Merve Yildiz

Curriculum Vitae
Name: Merve Yildiz
DOB: 17-10-85
Adress: straat
Den Haag
Zuid-Holland postcode

Phone: 0701031146
Mobile: 0681645192

Profile: I have work a lot with old people, i know the interests from the old people and how you take care of old people. I talk to them, the old people or sick people love me because i play games with them and talk a lot about their problems.

Education: Stanislascollege Delft
Havo

Amsterdam HBO
Nursing education

Rotterdam Erasmus university
Psychology of old people

Work experience:

February 2005-2008
Nurse in the Erasmus university in Rotterdam

March 2008-2010
Care taker in a old people’s home

October 2010-2012
Worked in a madhouse as a psychiatrist

Interests: My interests are football, reading, travelling and cooking.

Additionals information: I played football with a girl team when I was eighteen years old, and when i was twelf years old my mother had learn me how to cooke a cheesecake. Now i am a very great cook. I love travelling because I see the world, i see different people and different culture and religions. I learn a lot during my travel days. I wish I could see Antarctica. I’am very curious for Antarctica.

References:

Sven de Buur
0681416329
Surgeon on Erasmus hospital

Laura van Dam
0698932547
Nurse in a old people’s home

Nico Driessen
0621456932
Director of the madhouse

Old people: the elderly.

Rood is fout, paars is niet ideaal.

Je hebt in de laatste voor het kopje references. I'am geschreven. Dat moet I am zijn.

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merve58 schreef:

hey jongens ik moet een cv in het engels maken kunnen jullie alsjeblieft dit goed controleren?


Mark Sullivan
106 Piccadilly
Bristol
BS8 7TQ

17th March 2004

Dear Mr Mark,

I am writing to apply for the post of camp leader, which I saw advertised somewhere recently. This is my CV.
I look forward to hear from you
Sincerely,
Merve Yildiz

Curriculum Vitae
Name: Merve Yildiz
DOB: 17-10-85
Adress: straat
Den Haag
Zuid-Holland postcode

Phone: 0701031146
Mobile: 0681645192

Profile: I have worked a lot with old people, i know what old people are interested in and how you take care of them.I talk to them, old people or sick people like me because i play games with them and talk a lot about their problems.

Education: Stanislascollege Delft
Havo

Amsterdam HBO
Nursing education

Rotterdam Erasmus university
Psychology of old people

Work experience:

February 2005-2008
Nurse in the Erasmus university in Rotterdam

March 2008-2010
Care taker in a old people’s home

October 2010-2012
Worked in a psychiatric hospital as a psychiatrist

Interests: My interests are football, reading, travelling and cooking.

Additional information: I played football with a girl team when I was eighteen years old, and when i was twelve years old my mother has learned me how to cooke a cheesecake. Now i am a very great cook. I love travelling because I see the world, i see different people and different culture and religions. I learn a lot during my travel days. I wish I could see Antarctica. I am very curious for Antarctica.

References:

Sven de Buur
0681416329
Surgeon in the Erasmus hospital

Laura van Dam
0698932547
Nurse in a old people’s home

Nico Driessen
0621456932
Director of the madhouse

En ik zou de tel. nrs. maar vervangen door sterretjes!