one day

[JournyIntoSound]

In one day
There is a night
I want the sun to stay
Don’t want de moon by my site

De sun is shining very bright
It feels worm on my skin
Don’t want to see the moon light
Don’t want the earth to spin

Don’t want to say this day goodbye
Don’t want you to go away
I want to climb a mouton so high
To tell the sun that she have to stay


I want the clock to stop the time
I want to push the moon away
Want to say I’m not feeling fine
If you go today

The time won’t stop
The moon will come
The wind will blow away
The mighty sun

Stop the wind now
Stop the moon
Want to cry but don’t know how
Will I see you soon?

See my tear
In the light of a star
Why is it that I fear?
That you go so fare

I see the train riding
Lose you out of my sight
Is it worth fighting?
I’m so alone in the night

Nobody feel the pain
Nobody see me cry
There flowing like rain
I wish I could fly

When I fly
I’m always there for you
Don’t watch that I’m so high
Don’t have a clue

The way you love me is so sweet
Even if it sometimes hurt my soul
You have made my life complete
Put you’re love arrow right in the goal

It is good to let you know I love you
I really do
It’s good I knew
You love me too

[Gothic]

JournyIntoSound schreef:
In one day
There is a night
I want the sun to stay
Don’t want de moon by my site

De sun is shining very bright
It feels warm on my skin
Don’t want to see the moon light
Don’t want the earth to spin

Don’t want to say this day goodbye
Don’t want you to go away
I want to climb a mountain so high
To tell the sun that she have to stay


I want the clock to stop the time
I want to push the moon away
Want to say I’m not feeling fine
If you go today

The time won’t stop
The moon will come
The wind will blow away
The mighty sun

Stop the wind now
Stop the moon
Want to cry but don’t know how
Will I see you soon?

See my tear
In the light of a star
Why is it that I fear?
That you go so far

I see the train riding
Lose you out of my sight
Is it worth fighting?
I’m so alone in the night

Nobody feels the pain
Nobody sees me cry
There flowing like rain
I wish I could fly

When I fly
I’m always there for you
Don’t look/see that I’m so high
Don’t have a clue

The way you love me is so sweet
Even if it sometimes hurt my soul
You have made my life complete
Put you’re love arrow right in the goal

It is good to let you know I love you
I really do
It’s good I know
You love me too

Paar foutjes eruit gehaald...

Je gedicht, te letterlijk vertaald in het Engels, te gerijmd en de altijd gebruikte rijmwoorden -> te simpel. Het idee is lief, maar iets te cliché verwoord vind ik... Misschien eens in het Nederlands proberen?