Stom!!!!

[berteltje]

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Het gras is groen,

maar al meerdere keren heb ik jou verteld,

dat het gras groen is.

Maar waarom antwoord jij dan niet,

dat de lucht blauw is??

[Gothic]

Myself! schreef:

[Tofke_H]

Kimry schreef in dit topic:
I had closed the door upon my heart,
and wouldn't let anyone in.
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt,
but that would never happen again.

I had closed the door and tossed the key
as hard and as far as I could.
Love would never enter there again,
my heart was closed for good.

Then you came into my life,
and made me change my mind.
Just when I thought that tiny key
was impossible to find.

That when you held out your hand,
and proved to me I was wrong.
Inside your palm you held the key,
you'd had it al along.

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Kimry schreef in dit topic:
On angel's wings.
On angel's wings.
I will carry you
I will never let you fall
Whenever you should call.
My love for you is endless
I'll be forever true
My affection knows no limits
My heart made for you.

I will never take from you
What you don't freely give
And I will let you find your way
Whithin the life you choose to live

I will always be your listening ear
Your lover and your friend
I will never disappoint you
On me,you can depend.

So,if ever you should be in fear
Of what the future brings
I will take you high above
On my angel's wings.

En had hierop reeds 2 reactie's in dat topic:

Myself! schreef:
Tis een beetje een clinché gedichtjuh. Wel lief hoor, daar niet van

En mag ik je ff wijzen op het beleid van DoP? Niet meer dan 2 topics per dag

s p e a r i t t schreef:
hij is wel goed bedacht, maar de gedachten erachter komt niet echt goed naar voren. veel zinnen lijken eigenlijk op elkaar. hij leest trouwens wel goed.

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Kimry schreef in dit topic:
We're walking in the forest of life
I don't have to be afraid
because you are behind me
and you know how to walk

How long will you walk behing me
and show me the way to walk
I am hoping for a miracle each day
but everything tells me it have to come soon

How should I walk without you
I don't know the way to
I would wander around
I don't know how to walk

En had er reeds 1 reply op:

Myself! schreef:
Mjah..Niet super, niet slecht. Gewoon een beetje er tussen in. Staat wel een typfoutje in: How long will you walk behing me

Dat moet natuurlijk 'behind' zijn