nakijken Engelse schrijfopdracht (kort)

[Tha Ice]

Hallo mensen,

Zou er iemand van jullie die (wel) goed is in Engels mijn schrijfopdracht na kunnen kijken het is voor een beoordeling en aangezien die schaars zijn in 2e fase land wil ik er toch ff voor knallen. Het gaat om het aantal fouten die er zijn gemaakt en dus niet of het wel kwalitatief hoogstaand Engels is.

Dit is mijn tekst het moet over je basisschool gaan een beetje standaard gezwets daarover.

I visited the primary school in my living place Liempde. There were at the time I visited that school 600 pupils on it nowadays there are about 700 pupils visiting that school. There were about 30 pupils in one class. I have had a lot of nice teachers on that school, every year another teacher.

I had al lot of friends on the primary school and I liked playing with them. But most of my friends on the primary school I lost when I went to secondary school, because I haven’t seen them a lot because they went to other schools.

On primary school my favourite subject were geography, history and mathematic. Nowadays I still like history and geography but I don’t like mathematic anymore, because of mathematic isn’t as easy as it was on primary school.

I made a lot of nice trips with school. One time we went to Belgium for a few days that was the school trip I like most of all. I met there a lot of other pupils of a Belgium school and that was really fun. I have had contact with a few Belgium pupils after our school trip.

So the years I spent on the primary school were years full of fun.



BVD Joop,

[Tha Ice]

Ik heb het erg snel nodig kan iemand me helpen?
iig voor morgenvroeg 8 uur.

[maar]

Zou er iemand van jullie die (wel) goed is in Engels mijn schrijfopdracht na kunnen kijken het is voor een beoordeling en aangezien die schaars zijn in 2e fase land wil ik er toch ff voor knallen. Het gaat om het aantal fouten die er zijn gemaakt en dus niet of het wel kwalitatief hoogstaand Engels is.

Dit is mijn tekst het moet over je basisschool gaan een beetje standaard gezwets daarover.

I visited the primary school (?? bedoel je elementary school, of heet dat in de UK primary school?) in my living place living place = hometown Liempde. There were at the time I visited that school 600 pupils on it nowadays there are about 700 pupils visiting that schoolI used to go to that school, and when I went there, there were only 600 other pupils/children who did. Nowadays, there are about 700 of them.. Back when I went there, There were about 30 pupils in one in one = per? class. I have had a lot of nice teachers on on = at that school, every year another teacher.


I had al al=a lot of friends on on=at the primary school and I liked playing with them. But most of my friends on the primary school I lost when I went to secondary school, because I haven’t seen them a lot because they went to other schools.
But because we all went to different secondary schools, I haven't been seeing most of my primary school friends a lot over the past few years.

On on=at primary school my favourite subject subject=subjects were geography, history and mathematic mathematic=mathematics . Nowadays, I still like history and geography, but I don’t like mathematic mathematics anymore, because of 'of' moet weg mathematics isn’t as easy as it was on primary school.

I have made a lot of nice trips with school. One time we went to Belgium for a few days; that was the school trip I like like=enjoyed most of all 'of all' kan weg. I met there Over there, I met a lot of other pupils of of=from a Belgium school and that was really 'really' kun je 'a lot of' van maken, aangezien 'really fun' grammaticaal niet correct is fun. I have had contact with a few Belgium pupils after our school trip.

So So, all in all, the years I spent on the primary school were years full of fun.



geen tijd meer verder, maar de grote fouten zijn er iig uit. niet alle verbeteringen zijn noodzakelijk overigens, maken het wel mooier

[Tha Ice]

Wow ontzettend bedankt!
Dit verdubbelt mijn cijfer denk ik wel ^_^