Little girl inside of me[poging tot songtext)

[iamre18]

My eyes are turning to the blue white world
are moving the sky above my head
And I think about how it would be
to see my own world clear

If I could, I would fly the world around
to find the perfect sound, that belongs to me
Just let me be free, just let me see
the little girl inside of me

Sometimes my thoughts are playing
an evil game, it makes me so confused
Feelings are twirling and dancing
in my mind, their own stupid way

And I can't stop it, I can't find the words
to stay and create a peaceful world
inside of me, to Feel finally okay.

But,
If I could, I would fly the world around
to find the perfect sound, that belongs to me
Just let me be free, just let me see
the little girl inside of me

Someday I will find the perfect melody,
the sparkle to the liveliness
of my young passed Life.


Komt met kritiek, want ik heb de balle verstand van een songtext...(tis een snelle schrijfsel en mijn engels is niet al te best)

[Gothic]

skye = sky
i = I

Verder commentaar geef ik later, nu weinig tijd...

[iamre18]

Gothic schreef:
skye = sky
i = I

Verder commentaar geef ik later, nu weinig tijd...

Veranderd, tnx

[Exile]

het enige wat me op dit moment stoort is "to feel finally okay"
als de 3 lettergrepen je storen in finally moet je t in 2 zeggen.

wellicht dat het met akkoorden wat duidelijker is.