Would rather be deaf and dumb

[zand]

Would rather be death and dumb

I can’t see, can’t see anything of what is happening around me. It’s too vivid, my eyes won’t let any sunlight through but it’s still too vivid. A vivid colour red, of blood, my blood, my blood in my eyelashes. I decide to get my sunglasses. It becomes visible. My eyes are no longer bothered by a ball of light that a few milliard kilometres from here some thousand ton of hydrogen per second burns.
But do I, do I want to see that movie that’s calles ‘life’ and plays in front of me? You must enjoy life, life is short is me being told, life is given by god, seems it to be.
Next to me sits a young lady, she hasn’t got a clue that life is short, enjoying it is even out of the question, what appears by seeing her doing her lips, that seems to be given by god. She looks continuously in a small mirror, that she has with her and that the proces of her lips reflects.
In front of me barms a shadow slowly his way, to that shadow is an old man attached. Even how life is short he seems to take al his time to get himself to his destination. In my thoughts i say, in a very sarcastic way, that he obviously is ‘enjoying his life’. He must be on his way to get some tabbaco that seems to be created by god.
Than it becomes clear, why you have to enjoy life, because it is so short.
A mother with twentyfive children cycles by. One of her offspring is just old enough to cycle on his own, the rest is amazingly attached, in all possible ways, to her bike. The stoplight turns to red, but unfortunately, the oldest child goes through.
The mother screams, but it didn’t had any effect, just like the helmet the innocent victim had on. Under a devastating twitter asphalt and rubber mangles with living tissue what is found under the helmet and a red colour follows.
A vivid red colour of blood breaks through reality. I just took my sunglasses off and I closed my eyelashes.





zal nog wel wat misplaatst engels zijn.... eerste keer dat ik zoiets in het engels schrijf, ik heb 'm ook in het nederlands...
Ik vraag me af wat mensen hiervan vinden.

[maarte]

tis wel okeej, lees em denk ik liever int nederlands.. staat inderdaad vol met spelfouten
enne.. milliard --> billion
leuke vergelijking met die helm die niet uitmaakte..

[Mindfields]

Voortaan maar het woordenboek gebruiken, of weet je echt niet wat doofstom betekent?

[Ypci]

Ja, ik vond het wel een leuk stuk, maar ik zou hem graag in het Nederlands lezen. Wil je die aub sturen? ik ben benieuwd!!!