suggesties Engels tekstje?

[Sanneke1983]

Hoi!

Zou iemand alsjeblieft deze tekst voor mij na willen kijken. Naar mijn idee heb ik te veel 'point of view' gebruikt. Hoe kan ik dit het beste veranderen?

Alvast bedankt voor de moeite!


Finally, study overseas has a positive effect on this country’s culture and way of life, since students return with ideas which are different from the ideas from their homeland. They learn to look at certain things from another point of view. After this experience, they have the ability to let the people they know look at certain things from another point of view. Because they learned to look at certain things from different point of views, their ability to make a reasonable and well-considered choice is much better. For all the above reasons, priority should be given to studying abroad. This implies that the government should encourage students to go study abroad, instead of discouraging it.

[The Ox]

Pam schreef op 19-10-2003 @ 14:18:
Naar mijn idee heb ik te veel 'from another point of view' gebruikt. Hoe kan ik dit het beste veranderen?

"in a different way"?

[Trimm Trabb]

Wat Ox zeg. "In a different/another way" of "look at it from a different perspective" kan ook.

[Gatara]

Pam schreef op 19-10-2003 @ 14:18:

Finally, studying overseas will have a positive effect on the culture and way of living in the country of origin. That is, because students will eventually come back with different ideas. While being abroad they will encounter certain things from another point of view. After this experience, they will have the ability to influence people they know with their new gained perspectives. Also, because they will learn to look at certain things from different point of views, they will improve their ability to make a reasonable and well-considered choice. For all the above reasons, priority should be given to study abroad. This implies that the government should encourage students who want to study abroad, instead of discouraging them.

zoiets

verbeter maar als je nog wat fouten ziet

tis wel goe maar er zit veel herhaling in. er staan daar twee zinnen die hetzelfde zijn in een andere manier. (wel geen zin om ze aan te duiden, maar voor de rest vind ik het goe)

[Gatara]

sick minds schreef op 22-10-2003 @ 18:40:
tis wel goe maar er zit veel herhaling in. er staan daar twee zinnen die hetzelfde zijn in een andere manier. (wel geen zin om ze aan te duiden, maar voor de rest vind ik het goe)

heb je t nu tegen mij of tegen pam?

Euh, never mind what i said.

[Sanneke1983]

Thanx!!!