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[paranoia88]

Hej, ben nieuw hier, maar heb iets geschreven voor mn vriend en wil graag weten wat jullie er van vinden voor dat ik het aan hem geef, jullie zullen vast nog wel dingen hebben die beter kunnen.
Big Kiss


You are the one that make’s me smile
You taught me how to trust again
You were there when I needed you
Cause of you I feel again

Since the day I met you
I’d never stopped thinking about you
My feelings were and still are growing
Each and every day

The first time I looked into you’re eyes
I saw something that I never want to lose
I saw a sparkle in you’re eyes
Like a star in a dark night

And as I write with all my love for you
That I rather die than live without you
I hope you feel the same now and forever
And that you always be here with me

[Halogeen]

wat is de liefde toch geweldig

absoluut zo houden!




1 klein dingetje. In de 4e strofe, het is volgens mij:

I would (of: I'd) rather die than...