opdracht van engels

[Watisdit]

We kregen bij de les engels de opdracht een gedicht te maken.
ik heb dit geschreven, maar ik weet niet of er spellingsfouten in staan.
kun je me helpen?

She was looking for something, she didn’t know what, or where to search, but she did know that there was something missing, something important.

She began the search with groping the walls, touching the floor and sniffing the trees.
Everyone said she was crazy, and she gets left behind. She didn’t have any friends.

That’s when she realised that maybe the psychiatrist could help her.
But those people are vary hazy and he said:
Your problem is that you cannot imagine how things look.

For one week she thought about that.
But then she realised: I’m blind.

[OceanEye]

Watisdit schreef op 22-09-2004 @ 15:38 :
Everyone said she was crazy, and she gets left behind.

hoe bedoel je dat precies? je zegt nl. eerst 'said' (vt) en daarna 'gets' en dat klinkt een beetje raar...

[Liesjeuh]

*Everyone said she was crazy, and she gets left behind. She didn’t have any friends.
--> ik denk dat het 'she got' moet zijn

*But those people are very hazy

[Watisdit]

ok, bedankt ik zal het veranderen

[Flit]

'She began the search [B]by[B] groping the walls' ipv 'with groping the walls