Don't you fucking look back in my past

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No place left to hide
They say they will never look back in the past, but they lied.
Not safe for all the insanety,
And still pretending like I'm happy.

I don't want them to see,
That emptyness and anger are feeding me.
Is it possible for me to try?
Or is it useless, maybe I should die.

When you're eyes are full of death
I realize there's nothing left.
Don't even try, don't even care
From the day I could think, I knew life wasn't fair.

Walking away and never return back
Silently I hang a rope around my neck
My heart is caving in, please go away
No mercy for me, take my soul and go out and play.



ben niet echt blij met de laatste paar zinnen....die slaan niet meer op het onderwerp eigelijk..maargoed..

mUrder schreef op 27-10-2004 @ 11:51 :
No place left to hide
They say they will never look back in the past, but they've lied.
Not safe for all the insanity,
and still pretending like I'm happy.

I don't want them to see,
That emptiness and anger are feeding me.
Is it possible for me to try?
Or is it useless, maybe I should die?

When you're eyes are full of death
I realize there's nothing left.
Don't even try, don't even care
From the day I could think, I knew life wasn't fair.

Walking away and never return back
Silently I hang a rope around my neck
My heart is caving in, please go away
No mercy for me, take my soul and go out and play.

Ff de vautjes eruit gehaald

[CyWu]

mUrder schreef op 27-10-2004 @ 11:51 :
No place left to hide
They say they will never look back in the past, but they lied.
Not safe for all the insanety,
And still pretending like I'm happy.

I don't want them to see,
That emptyness and anger are feeding me.
Is it possible for me to try?
Or is it useless, maybe I should die.

When you're eyes are full of death
I realize there's nothing left.
Don't even try, don't even care
From the day I could think, I knew life wasn't fair.

Walking away and never return back
Silently I hang a rope around my neck
My heart is caving in, please go away
No mercy for me, take my soul and go out and play.



ben niet echt blij met de laatste paar zinnen....die slaan niet meer op het onderwerp eigelijk..maargoed..

Euhm ik denk aan een boze tiener als ik dit lees. Maar goed, ik vind dat de boodschap overkomt maar niet krachtig genoeg.

"Walking away and never return back"

Deze zin klopt niet: een oplossing zou zijn:

Walking away and never return

of

walking away and never come back.

Plus natuurlijk nog enkele foutjes die Alluman er uit haalde.

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dankjullie wel voor de vautjes er uit te halen...de spelling heeft me nooit echt gelegen..
en je kunt er ook een boze tiener in zien..iets anders ben ik niet volgens mn ouders..