love and hate

[pantzermench]

die must people people must die
If i say that
i hate you
what i must do
you hate me but i love you
i stand ride behind you
but waight a minut theres a clue
you gonna love me or die
he said that he hates me, and i said goodbye
i shoot him in he's ass, and he cry
But i sed goodbye
5 minutes later he was dead
but than i was mad
i have no reason to kill him, why did i kill him?
He hates me so what, i hate my self to
FUCK YOU!!!

[Gothic]

die must people, people must die
If I say that I hate you
what I must do
you hate me but I love you
I stand right behind you
but wait a minut there's a clue
you gonna love me or die
he said that he hates me, and I said goodbye
I shoot him in his ass, and he cried
But I said goodbye
5 minutes later he was dead
but than I was mad
I have no reason to kill him, why did I kill him?
He hates me, so what, I hate my self too
FUCK YOU!!!

Ik had de meeste fouten eruit gehaald, ik heb niet naar werkwoordsvormen gekeken, maar die kloppen ook niet altijd, gramaticaal gezien dan...

Ik vind je gedicht niets, sorry...

[bumblebee]

rustig...haal ff diep adem, adem uit, en haal dan die fouten eruit

whaaat? dat rijmt baina!! uit,eruit...ach BOEJT niet! =) solly...

neej, sorry, ik vind em ook niej mooi....