1e gedicht/song

[Bass]

Goeiedag tezamen.
Ik post hier eigenlijk nooit, maar volg wel wat er hier zoal wordt gepost. Zelf maak ik ook gedichten/songs, en wou hier nou eindelijk ns een keertje wat van mij posten dus bij deze

greetz
Bass

Let me tell you how how it feels like
when you have been betrayed
how it feels like when you find out
your vunrabitlity was been played on

the walls are coming down
and the staircase is filled with flames
the windows have locked with friends
the soul is burning down, so this is how it ends

lets knee down and sit in the corner
for the quiet en peace to return
why did you tell around i love her
how can you sit there and watch me burn (the bricks have broken, the floor is gone, chances for survival ; slim to none)

i think i saw here face before me
i think i saw people lauching out loud
i'd swear i saw my tower colaps
im just sitting in my room being, invinsible, while my heart is screaming out

[soulless]

Best goed Maar maggik ff spelfouten / grammatica eruit pikken?

'what it feels like'
'vulnerability'
'played upon'
'kneel'
'and'
'chances on survival'
'laughing'
'invinsible of invisible?'