Kan iemand hier AUB de fouten uithalen?

[White Cluster]

For me,a typical school day usually begins at seven o'clock a.m.
I have breakfast for about half an hour,I usually watch TV between having breakfast and going to school.At ten to eight I take my bike and ride to school with some friends.
School begin's at twenty five past eight a.m.
We have class for two houres before we get oure morning break.
Morning break is from five past ten till half past ten a.m.
After the morning break we have another two houres class,from half past ten till twelve o' clock a.m.,then we have our lunch break.
Lunch break is from twelve a clock to ten to one p.m.
In the afternoon, again,we have two houres class untill half past two,then is the third break.
After the third break we only have one houer left,that's from twenty to three till half past three p.m.
I get home at five a clock,I eat at six,make my homework at seven and watch TV for about 2 houres,then I go to sleep.


Ik weet het,tzit vol met fouten ..

[martijn1985]

Hybrid schreef:
For me,a typical school day usually begins at seven o'clock a.m.

>>>ik zou regular gebruiken ipv typical

I have breakfast for about half an hour,I usually watch TV between having breakfast and going to school.At ten to eight I take my bike and ride to school with some friends.

>> some is hier niet per se noodzakelijk, maar niet fout
School begin's at twenty five past eight a.m.

>> begins (die 's krijg je alleen als je bezit van iets wilt aangeven)
We have class for two houres before we get oure morning break.

>> oure = our
Morning break is from five past ten till half past ten a.m.
After the morning break we have another two houres class,from half past ten till twelve o' clock a.m.,then we have our lunch break.
Lunch break is from twelve a clock to ten to one p.m.

>> twelve a clock = twelve o'clock
In the afternoon, again,we have two houres class untill half past two,then is the third break.
After the third break we only have one houer left,that's from

>> houer = hour
twenty to three till half past three p.m.

>> till is afaik een afkorting van untill. Ik zou die laatste vorm gebruiken
I get home at five a clock,

>> hetzelfde: five o'clock
I eat at six,make my homework at seven and watch TV for about 2 houres,then I go to sleep.


Ik weet het,tzit vol met fouten ..

[Sciza]

Ik zou alle 'a.m.'s vervangen door 'in the morning'. De p.m's kan je wel zo laten, maak er anders 'in the afternoon' van.

[White Cluster]

whaa zo hard bedankt

[maar]

houres = hours
two houres class = two hours of class
till = until, niet untill
make my homework = do my homework
then is the third break= that is when our third break starts/then it is time for the third break o.i.d