Hulp Engels mondeling

[pluisje328]

Hallo iedereen

Zou iemand please deze Engelse tekst willen nakijken. Het is voor mijn mondeling van Engels dus de grammatica, woordkeuze, welluidendheid,... zijn daarom belangrijk.

My mother was born in Mol on the first of December 1961. It was very cold that day and there was no heating in the hospital, so it was very hard for my grandmother to give birth to my mother. But luckily everything went good. My mother was a lovely baby and didn't have any physical abnormalities. My grandparents lived in Witgoor, so my mother is raised there. When she was 2,5 an important moment in her live arrived: her first schoolday. My mother went to the nursery school in Witgoor. After 3 years at the nursery school she went to the Primary school, also in Witgoor. There she learnded how to write and how to read. When she was 12 she went to the secondary school in Herentals because she wants to become a shopkeeper. After four years she realised that it wasn't something for her so she went to het Sint-Lutgardus Instituut in Mol. There she studied hotel. Her favourite subject was Dutch. Her hobbies were dancing and she was a runner. She liked to play with hoola-hoops and dolls. She often went on travel, usually to Spain because she and her family loved Spain. When she was graduate she started working in a pub and then she became employee of a rest house. She likes her job so much that she still works there. At the age of nineteen she met my father in a dancing and they immediately fell in love with each other. Six years later they get married. They made their honeymoon to Spain. In in 1997 i was born.

Alvast hartelijk bedankt,

pluisje328

[mathfreak]

*ik geef hieronder de tekst met de nodige correcties weer*
My mother was born in Mol on the first of December 1961. It was very cold that day and there was no heating in the hospital, so it was very hard for my grandmother to give birth to my mother. But luckily everything went well.
*good is een bijvoeglijk naamwoord, maar je moet hier het bijwoord well gebruiken*
My mother was a lovely baby and didn't have any physical abnormalities. My grandparents lived in Witgoor, so my mother is raised there. When she was 2.5 an important moment in her live arrived: her first schoolday.
*in het Engels gebruik je voor het decimale scheidingsteken een punt en voor het scheiden van duizendtallen een komma*
My mother went to the nursery school in Witgoor. After 3 years at the nursery school she went to the Primary school, also in Witgoor. There she learnded how to write and how to read. When she was 12 she went to the secondary school in Herentals because she wanted to become a shopkeeper.
*je gebruikt wanted vanwege de verleden tijd*
After four years she realised that it wasn't something for her so she went to the Saint Lutgard Institute in Mol. There she studied at the catering and hotel management school. Her favourite subject was Dutch. Her hobbies were dancing and running. She liked to play with hoola-hoops and dolls. She often went travelling, usually to Spain because she and her family loved Spain. When she had graduated she started working in a pub and then she became employee of a rest house. She likes her job so much that she still works there. At the age of nineteen she met my father in a dancing and they immediately fell in love with each other. Six years later they got married.
*je gebruikt got vanwege de verleden tijd*
They made their honeymoon to Spain. In 1997 I was born.
*het persoonlijk voornaamwoord I wordt altijd met een hoofdletter geschreven*