schrijfoefening engels

[fysicachemie]

Hallo,
Zou er iemand mijn schrijfoefening kunnen nakijken van engels?
Er zitten waarschijnlijk heel veel fouten in want taalgevoel heb ik niet echt.
Alvast bedankt!


When I was young there were a lot of studies that I wanted to do. First, like a lot of young men, I wanted to be fireman. My second choice was to learn fly with an airplane. At last, I wanted be a police officer. Now it’s time to choose a subject and it is not the dream jobs when I was child. I enjoy learning about the biology of the human body. In the casino of Ostend, there was the human body exhibition. I found it interesting. I love science (especially biology and chemistry), it teaches you about everything in the world. Biology is interesting because it will tell you how you are made. You learn the process inside your body. Learn about animals and plants is also fascinating. Mathematic is not my favourite subject but it is better then Dutch, German, French and English. When you make an exercise in Maths, the answer is right or wrong. Not like English or other languages. Languages are very difficult because I don’t have linguistic feeling. Gym is a cool subject, you also do fun games, but studying physical education is nothing for me. Basically, I have always in mind that I wanted to do something with medical subjects. I think pharmacy or medicine. I like patient contact.
I don’t know if pharmacy is for me. It’s a fascinating job to educate patients about their medication and how to take it. It is a study with a lot of sciences; chemistry, biochemistry, physics and mathematics. Biology is more memorising than Chemistry. I find it cool to help people, to work closely with people every day. You can do many things with a diploma of pharmacist. Working in a clinic if clinical pharmacist. There is always the option going into an industry career and you can also work in a lab.

Pharmacy is less stressful and has nicer hours than Medicine. When you are a doctor, you must to work hours. Doctors often work long and don’t have as much time to spend with family and friends. A lot of responsibilities, it can be stressful, making a mistake, losing patients,… I think that it sometimes difficult to discuss with patients when the patient has a terminal illness. How to say it to the patient and the family. Doctor and family is difficult to combine.
I think that the studies medicine are more interesting than Pharmacy. It has more medical subjects. Every day brings different patients with different illness, it is a various job. It is difficult for me to concentrate in studies for long hours. (example an exam period) I like taking 10 minutes break each one hour studying or each one and half hour studying.
To earn much money is not important in my life but without money you simply die. I want to choose a dream job and not a job for the money. There are a lot of things that more important than money just like friendship, the feel with your parents,… Those things can't buy with money! When you are sick whatever you try you can’t buy your health. Later, I want working in team because two heads are better than one but I don’t have a problem with working alone.

[mathfreak]

Zie http://www.wetenschapsforum.nl/index...hrijfoefening/

Heey het is niet zo zeer dat je woorden fout zijn geschreven maar je zins grammatica dus de opbouw van 1 zin :$