*ik geef hieronder de tekst met de nodige correcties weer*
World of warcraft
Some people feel down, but instead of going to their doctor or psychologist, some people escape the sadness of life by gaming online, but why are people gaming such a game as world of warcraft when they feel down?
*als je zoiets als deerlijkheid bedoelt kun je dat het beste vertalen met sadness, aangezien dearnis een niet bestaand woord is*
Only to escape the sadness of life?
Sure, a lot of people play World of Warcraft to escape the sadness of life.
*a lot of people is meervoud, dus je moet play gebruiken*
It’s a massively multiplayer online rol-playing game ( MMORPG). You can make your own characters into a world with a lot of specialities. It’s a world that you can make with your imagination, you’re a whole other person in this imagination.
My first impression of world of warcraft is that it’s easy to play, it’s not difficult and you don’t need a PC that can run Crysis, that’s a game for which you need a good PC, however you don’t need a good PC to play the game.
*mine is een zelfstandig gebruikt bezittelijk voornaamwoord, maar je moet hier my gebruiken, en verder moet je, omdat you hier de tweede persoon enkelvoud is, don't gebruiken*
The graphics of the game are quite good.
*quiet betekent rust, stilte, of kalmte*
You’ve also got a lot things to choose from. There’re different varieties, and many quests. You can play these quests with your buddies.
The disadvantage of world of warcraft is money. Every month you must pay a bill for playing the game. Another disadvantage is that you need a lot of time.
*another wordt altijd als één woord geschreven*
You can play quests and go up in ranks, but you need much time to get a high rank and to complete all quests. There’re also a lot of people who are addicted to the game, those people don’t know the difference between real life and virtual life, and are only gaming and play world of warcraft.
*doesn't kan alleen bij de derde persoon enkelvoud (he, she, it) worden gebruikt, maar omdat those people meervoud is moet je hier don't gebruiken*
Much people are addicted to the game, and are escaping the sadness of life. It’s a great beautifull game with many possibilities and a game were you’ve got a second life, but it isn’t an alternative or is it?
*does it kan wel worden gebruikt als je isn't door doesn't offer vervangt*
The only reason I could find out that people play world of warcraft when they feel down is that they think the game is a second life. People can forget their problems when they play the game, because only then they’re in another life. They’re in a life were they can hardly fail, but can only win.
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