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[PHStudiosNL]

Hallo!!! Wij zijn bezig met een spel en we willen graag weten hoe het zit met de engelse zinnen in deze tekst.. Er zitten er volgens mij wel een aantal in, maar zou iemand hier even naar kunnen kijken? Alvast bedankt!!!!

You crashed as little alien on planet earth because you spaceship had problems.
You crashed in one of the seven seas of planet earth.
You task is to survive!!
The only way to survive is eating.
You have to eat you a way through the levels.
But you can only eat creatures smaller than you.
When you have eaten enough creatures you will grow and so you can eat bigger creatures.
And in the end you will be big enough to go on land.

Controls:
You need the mouse to move around. The alien will follow the mouse, when you press the right mouse button the alien will start to move.
If you press space you get a boost, and you will move some faster a few seconds. However it takes some time for you boost to reload.

Even snel wat aangepast zonder echt dingen enorm aan te passen:


You crashed as a little alien on planet earth because your spaceship had problems.
You crashed in one of the seven seas of planet earth.
Your task is to survive!!
The only way to survive is by eating.
You have to eat your way through the levels.
But you can only eat creatures smaller than you.
When you have eaten enough creatures you will grow and then you can eat bigger creatures.
And in the end you will be big enough to go on land.

Controls:
You need the mouse to move around. The alien will follow the mouse, when you press the right mouse button the alien will start to move.
If you press space you get a boost, and you will move a bit faster for a few seconds. However, it takes some time for your boost to reload.

[mathfreak]

Opmerking: de Engelse vertaling van aarde (de planeet) is Earth, dus met een hoofdletter.

Komt dit uit een translator? :')

[Serieus&Speels]

Andijvie schreef:

Even snel wat aangepast zonder echt dingen enorm aan te passen:
Controls:
You need the mouse to move around. The alien will follow the mouse, when you press the right mouse button the alien will start to move.
If you press space you get a boost, and you will move a bit faster for a few seconds. However, it takes some time for your boost to reload.

Ik gok dat er met space spatiebalk bedoeld wordt? Is het dan niet spacebar?
Kan: If you press space, you WILL get a boost niet beter?

[Geel]

PHStudiosNL schreef:

The alien will follow the mouse, when you press the right mouse button the alien will start to move.

Het lijkt alsof hier staat dat de alien de muis sowieso wel volgt (dus ook beweegt) maar dat je toch nog met je rechtermuisknop moet klikken om de alien te laten bewegen.