engels mondeling

[looneylover]

Hallo mensen..
Ik heb morgen mondeling engels, maar ik ben niet echt bepaald goed in het engels enzo en ook niet echt in het verzinnen van dingen.
ik ben de afgelopen week echt ziek geweest en toen heb ik er weinig aan kunnen doen.
Ik ga het over mijn huisdieren hebben en dan vooral over onze nieuwe hond.
dit heb ik nou verzonnen:

I would like to talk about my pets. We have two dogs at home, and we had a cat but she died last week in a caraccident. Her name was Missy and she was about two years old. It was very sad, it happened in front of our house. Our neigbour saw it happening and immediately informed us about the accident. My mom and I went over there to look if it was our cat, and it was. Then we burried her in our garden.
But excually, I want to talk about my new dog. Like I said we have two dogs at home, Mickey en Wolf. Mickey is twelve years old and Wolf, the new dog, about two years old. We wanted a new dog, because of Mickey’s age. So if Mickey died, what is likely to happen, then we already had a new one.
Wolf also had a caraccident, about three weeks ago. My mom was there when it happened. Wolf was standing on the highway, because there was a dead animal lying there. Like most dogs do, he had to sniffle the dead animal. My mom paniced and started to call him. Finally Wolf heard his name, and wanted to go back. When he did, a car hit him. My mom rushed over there, Wolf was lying on the ground. The woman who hit Wolf also paniced, and they tried to lift the dog into the car, so they could bring him to a vet. They couldn’t lift the dog, because he was to heavy. After five minutes he started to try to stand on his feet and my mom started to walk home, where she could call the vet to do a check-up.
The vet thought his left foot was broken, so a x-ray had to be made to see what was wrong. The foot turned out to be broken, and surgery was necessary. The surgery went well and Wolf has to rest for another six weeks.


zou iemand willen kijken of er bepaalde fouten in staan.
En heeft misschien iemand een idee wat ik er nog meer in kan zetten, want het moet eigenlijk wat langer.

alvast heel erg bedankt
groetjes

Neem het kadaver van je kat mee en vertel over zijn ingewanden . Ben je tien minuten mee bezig, en heeft het nog enige diepgang.

Of anders je hondje *:3* Dat vinden leraren leuk.

(aan het verbeteren begin ik niet, ik had zelf ook hulp nodig bij m'n engels mondeling)

[mathfreak]

*ik geef hieronder de tekst met de nodige correcties weer*

I would like to talk about my pets. We have two dogs at home, and we had a cat but she died last week in a car accident.
*car accident wordt altijd los van elkaar geschreven*
Her name was Missy and she was about two years old. It was very sad, it happened in front of our house. Our neigbour saw it happening and immediately informed us about the accident. My mom and I went over there to look if it was our cat, and it was. Then we burried her in our garden.
But acutally, I want to talk about my new dog. Like I said we have two dogs at home, Mickey and Wolf. Mickey is twelve years old and Wolf, the new dog, is about two years old. We wanted a new dog, because of Mickey’s age. So if Mickey would die, what is likely to happen, then we already would have a new one.
Wolf also had a car accident, about three weeks ago. My mom was there when it happened. Wolf was standing on the highway, because there was a dead animal lying there. Like most dogs do, he had to sniffle at the dead animal. My mom panicked and started to call him. Finally Wolf heard his name, and wanted to go back. When he did, a car hit him. My mom rushed over there, Wolf was lying on the ground. The woman who hit Wolf also panicked, and they tried to lift the dog into the car, so they could bring him to a vet. They couldn’t lift the dog, because he was too heavy.
*bij een vertaling van te zwaar of een soortgelijke vertaling gebruik je too*
After five minutes he started to try to stand on his feet and my mom started to walk home, where she could call the vet to do a check-up.
The vet thought his left foot was broken, so an X-ray had to be made to see what was wrong.
*X-ray (let op de hoofdletter) begint in de uitspraak met een klinker, dus gebruik je an*
The foot turned out to be broken, and surgery was necessary. The surgery went well and Wolf has to rest for another six weeks.

[Supersuri]

Je kan je mondeling Engels denk ik beter voorbereiden door moeilijke woorden te leren die met je onderwerp te maken hebben denk ik, dan ipv letterlijk een verhaaltje leren. Je kan nogal in de war raken als je leraar tussendoor een vraag aan je stelt.

[June bug]

mathfreak schreef op 25-03-2007 @ 16:44 :

But acutally, I want to talk about my new dog.

Om verwarring te voorkomen: het is 'actually'.

[mathfreak]

June bug schreef op 26-03-2007 @ 01:50 :
Om verwarring te voorkomen: het is 'actually'.

Dat bedoelde ik inderdaad, maar omdat ik een lichte vorm van dyslexie heb gebeurt het wel eens dat ik sommige letters per ongeluk verwissel. Het is me gistermiddag helaas niet opgevallen, anders had ik dat alsnog kunnen corrigeren.

[Ici-Paris_#]

ik ben ook heel slecht in Engels maar ik heb een 6,5

[looneylover]

Ici-Paris_# schreef op 27-03-2007 @ 16:40 :
ik ben ook heel slecht in Engels maar ik heb een 6,5

ik heb een 6 gehaald..naja in iedergeval beter dan een onvoldoende.. ik was gewoon te zenuwachtig maarja